smash

Nenad · 01-14-2007, 10:27 AM

She is one tough girl, You don't mess with her. Well, nobody told him that.

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"Gothal"-online comic + pics, paintings...

evolver · 01-14-2007, 01:45 PM

very well rendered!
seems a little stiff though.
i know no one believes in action lines since Hitch,
but i think maybe that would help it flow better.
her arms seem wierd..it just doesn't seem natural.

all crits aside you've obviously have mad skills and i can't wait to see more stuff!

xaltair · 01-14-2007, 01:57 PM

Very nice shading and action pose. What did he do, stare at her boobs too long?

Nenad · 01-14-2007, 06:45 PM

thanks for comments evolver, you are right..with some action lines, the smash would be more effective
as for the arms, I wanted some good balance of the pic and bodybuilding pose seemed right. It's a semi-funny pic
thanks xaltair , well that's a good reason - maybe he wasn't behaving politely...

01-14-2007, 10:27 AM	#1
Nenad johnnywhaam Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 22	smash She is one tough girl, You don't mess with her. Well, nobody told him that. www.stripi.com "Gothal"-online comic + pics, paintings... Last edited by Nenad; 01-14-2007 at 10:33 AM.

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01-14-2007, 01:45 PM	#2
evolver lost in translation Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: New Orleans Posts: 771	very well rendered! seems a little stiff though. i know no one believes in action lines since Hitch, but i think maybe that would help it flow better. her arms seem wierd..it just doesn't seem natural. all crits aside you've obviously have mad skills and i can't wait to see more stuff!

01-14-2007, 01:57 PM	#3
xaltair Boobies Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,315	Very nice shading and action pose. What did he do, stare at her boobs too long?

01-14-2007, 06:45 PM	#4
Nenad johnnywhaam Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 22	thanks for comments evolver, you are right..with some action lines, the smash would be more effective as for the arms, I wanted some good balance of the pic and bodybuilding pose seemed right. It's a semi-funny pic thanks xaltair , well that's a good reason - maybe he wasn't behaving politely...