Pin-up power

Poladium · 01-11-2007, 07:40 AM

Just the sample work..testing my skills whule waiting for people to answer in another (more technical) topic of mine.
Hope to hear some critics and suggestions.

Grant Perkins · 01-11-2007, 07:43 AM

Poladium · 01-11-2007, 07:46 AM

Paradox--?

Grant Perkins · 01-11-2007, 07:49 AM

That's better, you edited the pic in

Poladium · 01-11-2007, 11:41 AM

Either the drawing is too bad or two good..

Not many opinions so far. Guys,I want your crits!

Shake me hard!

JeffW. · 01-11-2007, 02:54 PM

I really like the linework here, but I think her arms may be a tad skinny, she doesn't look like she could beat up any bad guys.

xaltair · 01-11-2007, 03:10 PM

I like the face and hair a lot. I don't like the arms at all, they do look ultra skinny. The pose is good but since she's wearing a suit and you can still see her rib cage contour and everything it does seem like she's very skinny herself. Also, because of the pose and not seeing the feet she looks like she's about to keel over to the left.

Poladium · 01-11-2007, 03:47 PM

Guys,hands issue accepted. I`ll keep it for future reference.Any other bugs to fix? I`m personally not really comfortable with her breasts..

01-11-2007, 07:40 AM	#1
Poladium Registered User Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 22	Pin-up power Just the sample work..testing my skills whule waiting for people to answer in another (more technical) topic of mine. Hope to hear some critics and suggestions. Last edited by Poladium; 01-11-2007 at 07:47 AM.

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01-11-2007, 07:43 AM	#2
Grant Perkins is a Paradox. Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Doxxville, with Dwayne, Nigel, Bones and Zombie Dave. Posts: 2,961

01-11-2007, 07:46 AM	#3
Poladium Registered User Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 22	Paradox--?

01-11-2007, 07:49 AM	#4
Grant Perkins is a Paradox. Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Doxxville, with Dwayne, Nigel, Bones and Zombie Dave. Posts: 2,961	That's better, you edited the pic in

01-11-2007, 11:41 AM	#5
Poladium Registered User Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 22	Either the drawing is too bad or two good.. Not many opinions so far. Guys,I want your crits! Shake me hard!

01-11-2007, 02:54 PM	#6
JeffW. I always finish what I st Join Date: Feb 2003 Posts: 2,162	I really like the linework here, but I think her arms may be a tad skinny, she doesn't look like she could beat up any bad guys.

01-11-2007, 03:10 PM	#7
xaltair Boobies Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,315	I like the face and hair a lot. I don't like the arms at all, they do look ultra skinny. The pose is good but since she's wearing a suit and you can still see her rib cage contour and everything it does seem like she's very skinny herself. Also, because of the pose and not seeing the feet she looks like she's about to keel over to the left.

01-11-2007, 03:47 PM	#8
Poladium Registered User Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 22	Guys,hands issue accepted. I`ll keep it for future reference.Any other bugs to fix? I`m personally not really comfortable with her breasts..