Loki

Aaron · 01-10-2007, 08:20 PM

Let me know what ya'll think.
peace, Aaron

Saul Haber · 01-10-2007, 09:30 PM

Wow, this is great. The style fits the content perfectly. If I was fishing for a criticism, I'd say that Thor's right arm seems a little off, maybe where it connects to the torso. But that's barely noticable.

xaltair · 01-10-2007, 09:34 PM

Very nice, that's a real fox innit?

ArchonX · 01-10-2007, 10:03 PM

Looks great! Do you have a portfolio where we can see more of your stuff?

albone · 01-10-2007, 10:40 PM

Nice picture, great use of grey's. Loki looks dynamite.

Lord Fejj · 01-11-2007, 01:21 AM

This is awesome! I have no crits.

chaosgoat · 01-11-2007, 06:37 AM

Cool. Has a nice old school feel to it. The stippled shadow is kind of weird though. Look's a little out of place, since the rest is shaded with crosshatch. Dunno.

Aaron · 01-11-2007, 01:37 PM

Thanks everyone!

Saul- Thanks man. You are definitely right about the arm... I rush Thor a bit. Good eye.

Xaltair- "real".. nope, but what's real these days anyway?

ArchonX- Tanks... as for portfolio, I kind of have a few (although I don't really think of them as a portfolio... more as just a place to show what I do)
http://dancingdoorguy.deviantart.com/
http://www.tentonstudios.com/forum/i...p?topic=3197.0
http://www.penciljack.com/forum/showthread.php?t=72600

Albone and Lord Fejj- thanks all!

Chaosgoat- Who you calling old? jk. I see see what you mean about the stipple. I was actually wondering how people felt about that... I wasn't sure myself, but I thought it might just add the texture I wanted.

Anyway thanks everyone... oh wait I forgot to mention that this pic is for this weeks Ten Ton Studio sketch challenge http://www.tentonstudios.com/forum/i...p?topic=3480.0 So come on over and vote for me

Peace, Aaron (dancingdoorguy)

Inkubuss · 01-11-2007, 01:57 PM

This is great!
I love the textures, everything looks fine I would only complain about Loki`s glance, his thoughts seem to be out of the scene, it confuses me a little. but it`s very cool indeed

sevans · 01-11-2007, 02:14 PM

It has a great 'classic' feel to the piece and a nice variety of inking. I have to agree with Chaosgoats the comment about the stippled shadow, it looks more like a texture than a cast shadow.

PLUS, even though the piece is mainly Loki, I'm really liking the way that Thor is emerging/showing through the smoke. Very nicely done.

Aaron · 01-11-2007, 02:55 PM

Thanks again guys! I have to run to work now, but I wanted to share the warm up sketches... Enjoy!!!

Lord Fejj · 01-11-2007, 07:03 PM

That last one is sweet!

nickbachman · 01-11-2007, 08:39 PM

yeah that last one gives me chills!

Biofungus · 01-11-2007, 08:52 PM

Nothing personal, Aaron, but to me, the warm up sketches are way better than that first, completed image.

khoipham · 01-11-2007, 09:40 PM

this gives me norwegian wood.

01-10-2007, 08:20 PM	#1
Aaron Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Seattle, Wa Posts: 112	Loki Let me know what ya'll think. peace, Aaron

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01-10-2007, 09:30 PM	#2
Saul Haber Registered User Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 1,581	Wow, this is great. The style fits the content perfectly. If I was fishing for a criticism, I'd say that Thor's right arm seems a little off, maybe where it connects to the torso. But that's barely noticable.

01-10-2007, 09:34 PM	#3
xaltair Boobies Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,315	Very nice, that's a real fox innit?

01-10-2007, 10:03 PM	#4
ArchonX Goblin King Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: LA Posts: 104	Looks great! Do you have a portfolio where we can see more of your stuff?

01-10-2007, 10:40 PM	#5
albone Jabbroni Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Milwaukee Posts: 1,256	Nice picture, great use of grey's. Loki looks dynamite.

01-11-2007, 01:21 AM	#6
Lord Fejj Be water my friend... Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The Tang Dynasty Posts: 1,559	This is awesome! I have no crits.

01-11-2007, 06:37 AM	#7
chaosgoat Uh-huh... Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Kentucky Posts: 2,441	Cool. Has a nice old school feel to it. The stippled shadow is kind of weird though. Look's a little out of place, since the rest is shaded with crosshatch. Dunno.

01-11-2007, 01:37 PM	#8
Aaron Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Seattle, Wa Posts: 112	Thanks everyone! Saul- Thanks man. You are definitely right about the arm... I rush Thor a bit. Good eye. Xaltair- "real".. nope, but what's real these days anyway? ArchonX- Tanks... as for portfolio, I kind of have a few (although I don't really think of them as a portfolio... more as just a place to show what I do) http://dancingdoorguy.deviantart.com/ http://www.tentonstudios.com/forum/i...p?topic=3197.0 http://www.penciljack.com/forum/showthread.php?t=72600 Albone and Lord Fejj- thanks all! Chaosgoat- Who you calling old? jk. I see see what you mean about the stipple. I was actually wondering how people felt about that... I wasn't sure myself, but I thought it might just add the texture I wanted. Anyway thanks everyone... oh wait I forgot to mention that this pic is for this weeks Ten Ton Studio sketch challenge http://www.tentonstudios.com/forum/i...p?topic=3480.0 So come on over and vote for me Peace, Aaron (dancingdoorguy)

01-11-2007, 01:57 PM	#9
Inkubuss Registered User Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 36	This is great! I love the textures, everything looks fine I would only complain about Loki`s glance, his thoughts seem to be out of the scene, it confuses me a little. but it`s very cool indeed

01-11-2007, 02:14 PM	#10
sevans www.sevans.co.nz Join Date: May 2004 Location: behind you ...... MotherF**KER! Posts: 4,525	It has a great 'classic' feel to the piece and a nice variety of inking. I have to agree with Chaosgoats the comment about the stippled shadow, it looks more like a texture than a cast shadow. PLUS, even though the piece is mainly Loki, I'm really liking the way that Thor is emerging/showing through the smoke. Very nicely done.

01-11-2007, 02:55 PM	#11
Aaron Registered User Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Seattle, Wa Posts: 112	Thanks again guys! I have to run to work now, but I wanted to share the warm up sketches... Enjoy!!!

01-11-2007, 07:03 PM	#12
Lord Fejj Be water my friend... Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: The Tang Dynasty Posts: 1,559	That last one is sweet!

01-11-2007, 08:39 PM	#13
nickbachman Jim Kuback Join Date: Nov 2002 Location: Minneapolis Posts: 178	yeah that last one gives me chills!

01-11-2007, 08:52 PM	#14
Biofungus Not for your amusement Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Nega-Earth Posts: 22,083	Nothing personal, Aaron, but to me, the warm up sketches are way better than that first, completed image.

01-11-2007, 09:40 PM	#15
khoipham khoipham.com Join Date: Nov 2003 Location: Outside Philly Posts: 1,415	this gives me norwegian wood.