the Wolverine!

Inkubuss · 01-09-2007, 06:05 AM

hello guys!
here`s a pic of wolverine that I`m working on, I`ll ink it tomorrow,
enjoy!
critics wellcome

chaosgoat · 01-09-2007, 06:55 AM

Well, hell... I can't pick out anything wrong with this. Finish this bad-boy up, yo.

Shep · 01-09-2007, 09:58 AM

diggin' it so far, looking forward to seeing this finished!

**steveo** · 01-09-2007, 10:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shep

diggin' it so far, looking forward to seeing this finished!

Nice rendering...can't wait to see it finished.

SteveO
e3w

RAMolinelli · 01-09-2007, 10:17 AM

Wow if you were drawing Wolverine I'd buy it! This is great!

harry4 · 01-09-2007, 10:57 AM

ay up this is some heavy art work here, can't see anything wrong with it, you want someone to colour it after you done inks

Inkubuss · 01-09-2007, 11:28 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by RAMolinelli

Wow if you were drawing Wolverine I'd buy it! This is great!

thankyou!
by the way this is the second time I got asked to draw him for a Magazine cover,
this is the first one.

K.E. Woolfork · 01-09-2007, 12:14 PM

Sweet. Reminds me of Trevor Hairsine . . . except finished. It's like that dude never finishes ANYTHING!

k.

zombiekiller 013 · 01-09-2007, 12:47 PM

ya inkubuss i'm with everyone else here, it looks great and i cant wait to see it finished.

DarkKni9hT · 01-09-2007, 01:40 PM

Very nice indeed. I like the dynamic pose and the rendering is just great. You've nailed Logan's attitude as well. There are, however a couple of problem areas. First and most problematic is your choice of cutoff at the bottom. Most comic as well as classical artists will agree that you should never cutoff a character right at the knee. It just looks awkward no matter how well drawn the piece is.
Secondly, and this only applies to your goal of using the pic as a magazine cover, you've made the entire image too large. When the logo and text goes over this pic, all your great details and dynamism will be blotted out. When posing a piece for a cover, you need to compose the image so as to leave room for all the other stuff that will eventually be there. Rough in the logo at the top of the page and compose your character from there.
Finally, and this is a small nitpick, his left forearm seems to lack bulk in comparison to the upper arm. Nice foreshortening in the arm as a whole but you got a bit carried away. You could beef that forearm up some and still have the illusion of depth.
Great piece on the whole Inkubuss. I'd love for you to post the finished image .

sevans · 01-09-2007, 02:32 PM

Nice work!

thecarrierone · 01-09-2007, 03:12 PM

kinda reminds me of alan davis and that of course is a good thing.

nice pose great anatomy and awesome rendering.

OZ! · 01-09-2007, 05:08 PM

Excellent work! Love the style.

Inkubuss · 01-09-2007, 11:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DarkKni9hT

Very nice indeed. I like the dynamic pose and the rendering is just great. You've nailed Logan's attitude as well. There are, however a couple of problem areas. First and most problematic is your choice of cutoff at the bottom. Most comic as well as classical artists will agree that you should never cutoff a character right at the knee. It just looks awkward no matter how well drawn the piece is.
Secondly, and this only applies to your goal of using the pic as a magazine cover, you've made the entire image too large. When the logo and text goes over this pic, all your great details and dynamism will be blotted out. When posing a piece for a cover, you need to compose the image so as to leave room for all the other stuff that will eventually be there. Rough in the logo at the top of the page and compose your character from there.
Finally, and this is a small nitpick, his left forearm seems to lack bulk in comparison to the upper arm. Nice foreshortening in the arm as a whole but you got a bit carried away. You could beef that forearm up some and still have the illusion of depth.
Great piece on the whole Inkubuss. I'd love for you to post the finished image .

thanks for your critics, they`ll help me improve my work

and thanks for your kind comments also!

Rob Norton · 01-10-2007, 01:36 AM

looks pretty freakin sweet so far...

rob

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01-09-2007, 06:55 AM	#2
chaosgoat Uh-huh... Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Kentucky Posts: 2,441	Well, hell... I can't pick out anything wrong with this. Finish this bad-boy up, yo.

01-09-2007, 09:58 AM	#3
Shep Superman's Pal Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 422	diggin' it so far, looking forward to seeing this finished!

01-09-2007, 10:17 AM	#5
RAMolinelli Illustrator Join Date: Feb 2002 Posts: 1,104	Wow if you were drawing Wolverine I'd buy it! This is great!

01-09-2007, 10:57 AM	#6
harry4 Registered User Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 159	ay up this is some heavy art work here, can't see anything wrong with it, you want someone to colour it after you done inks

01-09-2007, 12:14 PM	#8
K.E. Woolfork aka wolfprime Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Baghdad, Iraq Posts: 561	Sweet. Reminds me of Trevor Hairsine . . . except finished. It's like that dude never finishes ANYTHING! k.

01-09-2007, 12:47 PM	#9
zombiekiller 013 eric hurley Join Date: Aug 2005 Location: idaho falls, id Posts: 419	ya inkubuss i'm with everyone else here, it looks great and i cant wait to see it finished.

01-09-2007, 01:40 PM	#10
DarkKni9hT Th'Ink Tank Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Montreal, QC Posts: 1,599	Very nice indeed. I like the dynamic pose and the rendering is just great. You've nailed Logan's attitude as well. There are, however a couple of problem areas. First and most problematic is your choice of cutoff at the bottom. Most comic as well as classical artists will agree that you should never cutoff a character right at the knee. It just looks awkward no matter how well drawn the piece is. Secondly, and this only applies to your goal of using the pic as a magazine cover, you've made the entire image too large. When the logo and text goes over this pic, all your great details and dynamism will be blotted out. When posing a piece for a cover, you need to compose the image so as to leave room for all the other stuff that will eventually be there. Rough in the logo at the top of the page and compose your character from there. Finally, and this is a small nitpick, his left forearm seems to lack bulk in comparison to the upper arm. Nice foreshortening in the arm as a whole but you got a bit carried away. You could beef that forearm up some and still have the illusion of depth. Great piece on the whole Inkubuss. I'd love for you to post the finished image .

01-09-2007, 02:32 PM	#11
sevans www.sevans.co.nz Join Date: May 2004 Location: behind you ...... MotherF**KER! Posts: 4,526	Nice work!

01-09-2007, 03:12 PM	#12
thecarrierone student of the art of art Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: whitewater wi Posts: 1,117	kinda reminds me of alan davis and that of course is a good thing. nice pose great anatomy and awesome rendering.

01-09-2007, 05:08 PM	#13
OZ! All Powerful Wizard Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Texas Posts: 4,501	Excellent work! Love the style.

01-10-2007, 01:36 AM	#15
Rob Norton apprentice of the pencil Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: utah Posts: 2,750	looks pretty freakin sweet so far... rob