First timer...be gentle

Freeman01 · 01-08-2007, 06:02 PM

I was playing around with classic monster arch types....Feed back is appreciated...

yakattack_one · 01-08-2007, 06:06 PM

welcome to the boards.
I like what you drew here.
I think some colors would help seperate everything.
Right now it just seems to be smushed together.
I do however understand what I think you are trying for.
The style is great.
Can not wait to see it colored.
Hope to see more from you soon.

Paul Sanderson · 01-08-2007, 06:08 PM

This reminds me a little of G.'s work here. Nice to have you here.

sevans · 01-08-2007, 09:43 PM

Not a bad start. Needs more refining etc.

A very basic thing that you could change next time would be the line weights. In general cartoon 'language' the background linework should be thinner, creating an illusion of depth, than the foreground linework.

So... your werewolf needs thinner lines.

01-08-2007, 06:02 PM	#1
Freeman01 Registered User Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 49	First timer...be gentle I was playing around with classic monster arch types....Feed back is appreciated...

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01-08-2007, 06:06 PM	#2
yakattack_one Registered User Join Date: Nov 2005 Posts: 127	welcome to the boards. I like what you drew here. I think some colors would help seperate everything. Right now it just seems to be smushed together. I do however understand what I think you are trying for. The style is great. Can not wait to see it colored. Hope to see more from you soon.

01-08-2007, 06:08 PM	#3
Paul Sanderson Dread Avenger Join Date: Dec 2003 Location: Metro City Posts: 12,414	This reminds me a little of G.'s work here. Nice to have you here.

01-08-2007, 09:43 PM	#4
sevans www.sevans.co.nz Join Date: May 2004 Location: behind you ...... MotherF**KER! Posts: 4,525	Not a bad start. Needs more refining etc. A very basic thing that you could change next time would be the line weights. In general cartoon 'language' the background linework should be thinner, creating an illusion of depth, than the foreground linework. So... your werewolf needs thinner lines.