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Cloves Rodrigues · 01-08-2007, 08:11 AM

coments, please

Gav Heryng · 01-08-2007, 09:07 AM

The level of detail in this is great, although I think it could do with a few more black areas. Either that or it needs colouring.

I have a lot of problems with the female figure, though. Some things have to do with her anatomy - such as her left arm and shoulder which seem unusually short and twisted and the size of her head which seems unusually small compared to her body - and some things have to do with her pose - which seems unnatural and like it was borrowed from a girly mag.

That said, if it was cheescake you were going for, then it's just the anatomy issues I'd pick up on.

Dis

xaltair · 01-08-2007, 04:04 PM

I want to poke her with a stick *poke* *poke* hehehe...

Fresco · 01-08-2007, 04:11 PM

I know the money shot is INSIDE the cage... but I am totally digging the leaves in the upper half of the drawing even more.

You should have a contest to see who guesses the exact number of leaves drawn... just like those 'how many jellybeans are inside the jar' raffels.

mmmmm... jellybeans!

chaosgoat · 01-08-2007, 09:49 PM

Yeah, I think dis got most of the anatomy issues. I'm not digging the pose so much, but I am in LOVE with the detail you're put into the cage and trees! Gorgeous.

01-08-2007, 08:11 AM	#1
Cloves Rodrigues oficinadobill.wordpress Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Brazil ! Posts: 569	forrest coments, please

01-08-2007, 09:07 AM	#2
Gav Heryng Formally Known As Dismas Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: Madchester Posts: 3,589	The level of detail in this is great, although I think it could do with a few more black areas. Either that or it needs colouring. I have a lot of problems with the female figure, though. Some things have to do with her anatomy - such as her left arm and shoulder which seem unusually short and twisted and the size of her head which seems unusually small compared to her body - and some things have to do with her pose - which seems unnatural and like it was borrowed from a girly mag. That said, if it was cheescake you were going for, then it's just the anatomy issues I'd pick up on. Dis __________________ Follow me on Facebook! Follow me on Twitter! Follow me on Deviant Art! Follow me on MySpace!

01-08-2007, 04:11 PM	#4
Fresco Fresco Studio Boss Join Date: Jan 2002 Posts: 2,061	I know the money shot is INSIDE the cage... but I am totally digging the leaves in the upper half of the drawing even more. You should have a contest to see who guesses the exact number of leaves drawn... just like those 'how many jellybeans are inside the jar' raffels. mmmmm... jellybeans! __________________ Franchesco! Fresco Studio franchesco.com MySpace ... deviantART

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01-08-2007, 04:04 PM	#3
xaltair Boobies Master Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: Toronto, Canada Posts: 2,315	I want to poke her with a stick poke poke hehehe...

01-08-2007, 09:49 PM	#5
chaosgoat Uh-huh... Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Kentucky Posts: 2,441	Yeah, I think dis got most of the anatomy issues. I'm not digging the pose so much, but I am in LOVE with the detail you're put into the cage and trees! Gorgeous.