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11-07-2006, 10:49 PM
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Chee Lee
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11-09-2006, 03:54 PM
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Registered User
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Nice pages but on Page 6 the shot where someone is putting something in their pocket... it has the problem of you can't really tell who is putting something in their pocket and what IT is... if it was established on a previous, unshown page I still think it should be shown to remind readers what the item is, even if it is just a page before.
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11-09-2006, 04:07 PM
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the love ninja
Join Date: Jul 2006
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the main guy is very inconsistent...he looks different ages in almost every panel and on page 7 he looks like he's 7 feet tall...
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11-09-2006, 09:34 PM
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Chee Lee
Join Date: Dec 2004
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Proto- Good point you bring out about the pocket. i'll have to remember that the next time I do something like this.
HBlazer- thank you for pointing that out to me. It is one of the things that I struggle with quite a bit. i am trying to work on being more consistent as i know it will help with the overall continuity. i appreciate the set of eyes that you both put on this. mad props to both of you for helping out. Peace out- Cesar |
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