Layouts from my upcoming web comic.

astromerc · 08-08-2012, 04:22 PM

Hey everyone,

Just wanted to get some input on this layout page before I finalize on which way to go.

1st pic I added a dutch tilt, I know it is not favored shot because it is ment to disorient but I thought it may work.

2nd same pg correct angle but I am breaking the panel agian I know not favored but I think this could also work.

Just wanted to get some thoughts on the pages.

Thanks,

Astromerc

Rex · 08-16-2012, 09:46 PM

That's a great running figure. I can't tell what's happening in next three panels, though. Is that a camera? What happens then? To me, those issues are more important than to tilt or not to tilt.
Of course, I do like the tilt better. Maybe not so extreme.
Webcomics are practically free. I think the important thing with them is to just get it done. You'll be so busy cranking it out you'll get better naturally and quickly.

astromerc · 08-17-2012, 01:46 PM

Hey thanks Rex yeah I was purposely vage with the remaining panels because, I did not want to give too much away. I am only posting 1-2 pages a week. That is why the angle was so important to me. However you are correct, cranking out is the most important thing and a good story. Not a camera but, a satellite.

Thanks again!

Here is the almost final I'm going with:

08-08-2012, 04:22 PM	#1
astromerc Registered User Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Maryland Posts: 83	Layouts from my upcoming web comic. Hey everyone, Just wanted to get some input on this layout page before I finalize on which way to go. 1st pic I added a dutch tilt, I know it is not favored shot because it is ment to disorient but I thought it may work. 2nd same pg correct angle but I am breaking the panel agian I know not favored but I think this could also work. Just wanted to get some thoughts on the pages. Thanks, Astromerc

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08-16-2012, 09:46 PM	#2
Rex The Antidrama Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Las Vegas, NV Posts: 172	That's a great running figure. I can't tell what's happening in next three panels, though. Is that a camera? What happens then? To me, those issues are more important than to tilt or not to tilt. Of course, I do like the tilt better. Maybe not so extreme. Webcomics are practically free. I think the important thing with them is to just get it done. You'll be so busy cranking it out you'll get better naturally and quickly.

08-17-2012, 01:46 PM	#3
astromerc Registered User Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Maryland Posts: 83	Hey thanks Rex yeah I was purposely vage with the remaining panels because, I did not want to give too much away. I am only posting 1-2 pages a week. That is why the angle was so important to me. However you are correct, cranking out is the most important thing and a good story. Not a camera but, a satellite. Thanks again! Here is the almost final I'm going with: