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Old 10-29-2018, 07:04 PM   #346
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You missed the point...I did not state that black is BAD nor did i state the use of black being wrong..My point is that " pro work" is drawing correctly before black is added to insure the compositions and figures "READ" clearly and tell the story...If you are a pro, I would like to see that work and what publications you have been published.
sorry i missed the point and i appreciate you taking time to do these crits. BTW, i can only dream of being a pro but i am an avid fan of comics.
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Old 10-29-2018, 07:29 PM   #347
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sorry i missed the point and i appreciate you taking time to do these crits. BTW, i can only dream of being a pro but i am an avid fan of comics.
Hes actually not critiquing as much as he's just being an ass- look at his comments. Also if someone has to ask why a couple of figure sketches that are backlit and done in a heavy inked style has so much black they probably don't know as much as they think they do.
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Old 10-30-2018, 09:01 PM   #348
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I cannot tell what is going on in these drawings...Why are they so damn black???..Wrinkles on the drapery is poorly executed even in silohuette...Done properly, drawings blacked in can be believable when all the proportions, anatomy and drapery are done correctly...No matter the genre or reason for the art. You really need to work hard as hell as well as study to get this stuff right and doing "finished?" Doodles without knowing the basics is futile.
Kind of pick, arent you? First of concepts arent “finished”, they are just roughs, Metalni is just posting his work, trying different things. I personally wish i could be so brave to add so much black to my work.
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Old 11-12-2018, 04:28 AM   #349
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great studies, i really love the laughing guy and the guy beneath him on the right. they both capture a character in a certain moment perfectly, one is happy and the other glum.
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Old 11-16-2018, 02:16 PM   #351
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Thanks man.

And some storyboards from the last few days:



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Old 11-16-2018, 06:13 PM   #352
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Is this set in the old JNA base in Pljesevica mountain��
But seriuosly, is this a personal project or for a customer? Looking good
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tells the story very clearly
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Old 11-17-2018, 02:23 AM   #354
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Thanks guys.
@Ld, no, it's not located there- but, I'm living near by.. around 80km down the Una.

Regarding the project, it's still a personal project, but we will see. I've drew around 9 rough boards, as a story beginning. Now I need to find a writer to expand and shape this into something useful.

I contacted my publisher in Canada, and he was very interested.
But, as I said, we will see- I am out of free time right now for things like that due to some crazy deadlines I have, regarding my storyboarding job.
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Thanks guys.
@Ld, no, it's not located there- but, I'm living near by.. around 80km down the Una.

Regarding the project, it's still a personal project, but we will see. I've drew around 9 rough boards, as a story beginning. Now I need to find a writer to expand and shape this into something useful.

I contacted my publisher in Canada, and he was very interested.
But, as I said, we will see- I am out of free time right now for things like that due to some crazy deadlines I have, regarding my storyboarding job.
I used to live in Cazin, as a kid I remember travelling towards Bihac, and there was that winding road going down the mountain, it used to freak me out. It is a beautiful region, shame the war drove us from there.
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Old 11-18-2018, 02:25 AM   #356
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Haha, I didnt know we were neighbors back in a time.
Yeah, war really ruined many things.

Btw, the wind there- is still creppy, no worries.
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