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Old 07-09-2018, 10:22 PM   #1
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Marvel Sequentials.

Hey guys!

Been a long time. Glad to see this community is still thriving.
I took some time off posting as I was just focusing on getting better, and trying to get work with a major company which I’m still working my backside off for.

Also pitched a few original ideas with some great writers but none have landed as yet.

I did meet some great people at NYCC last year though, and even got to show these to Marvel. Still, the work doesn’t stop.

What have you guys been up to? Will try hang out here more often now..

Hope your like!





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Old 07-10-2018, 04:21 AM   #2
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Your artwork is looking very, very good.
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Great Work!

Nice to see your work again! and showing more work to Marvel hopefully you get picked

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Old 07-10-2018, 01:39 PM   #4
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My current work and presently drawing more

I recently worked on a short for the Puerto Rican victims project, Puerto Rico Strong published by Lion forge studios 2018. I drew an anthology sequentials of six pages with writer Gene Selassie and it came out on March 18th here's a link of SyFy.com what even cool our first page of the sequential project was in heading

http://www.syfy.com/syfywire/comics-...rricane-relief

https://www.washingtonpost.com/news/...=.1b2e189a31df

And working on new stuff for pitch and etc and heading this year to thecomic-con in New York 2018 Oct 4-7th.
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That's some good stuff! I just wonder where the rest of the Avengers came from in that last panel...?
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Scribbly; thanks man! Hope you’ve been well

Orland29; thanks Orlando. That’s great work for a noble cause too. Congrats!

Bishop; cheers. They came from the quintet of course
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Old 07-11-2018, 03:29 AM   #7
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These are good! Tight perspective, figures, compositions. Well done.

Remove the blue pencils if these are to be final samples, it's no benefit to an editor as is.

Some of the forms are conflated or flattened, as in woman's shocked face in 1.3, back of Cap's head hatching in 2.1 and shadows under cars way over-hatched in 3.5, same on Cap's boot in 4. Hulk torso a little short in 4 as well. Nitpicks: Widow's eyes are maybe too far apart and Thor also seems like a bit of an afterthought, could be stood behind Cap raising hammer, bigger figure.

I would do a little less stylization on the bursts of debris in 2.4 and 3.5, where a slightly more naturalistic approach would more consistently fit with the mostly representational world you've crafted. Consistency in degree of abstraction is important. Do a bit more research on it, get ref on the physics of damage and debris, take screencaps of Youtube slow-mo/destruction videos etc.

Keep going! Good luck! Do another sample, maybe just a variation on this, and post soon?

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Old 07-12-2018, 10:16 AM   #9
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I really like the art on this one! I'm with bishop if I was drawing this to submit to editors...take the avengers out. You don't want an editor asking any questions or getting taken out of story. If you were just doing it for fun then my bad.
Second page with ultron is my favorite really like the camera angle and use of backgrounds.

The only thing I didn't get is the big hunk of blank space on page 3 by ultron close up. If you are using the space for lettering I would say just expand that panel or if you are going to show people watching the fight from the street. I don't know that blank space throws me off some.

But overall I think you can tell you put a lot of time and work into these pages.
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MattTriano - Thanks for the feedback man!

Well-bee - Thanks!

Afro - thanks for the comments!
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how you didn't get a job yet at marvel ???
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