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06-12-2012, 09:59 AM
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Thanks to both leemilewski and thejaz180. Yes, the text needs some adjustments, mainly since English is not my native tongue it definitely would need it. And I didn't do the main coloring, just the flats. But I'll take your comments into thought, thank you very much.
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06-13-2012, 11:15 AM
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OH my God! These pages are so dope! Nice work my dude! I don't see what everyone's talking about with the colors except for more depth! Other than that everything's cool. The texture thing? eh! The drawing has that covered. You don't want to overwhelm the viewer with too much texture.
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06-13-2012, 07:08 PM
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Thanks man. I can see what the guys meant with the colors and I appreciate the honest criticism.
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06-14-2012, 03:11 PM
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Love this, man. Amazing stuff.
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06-14-2012, 07:21 PM
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Wow fantastic job!!!
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06-15-2012, 11:38 AM
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Thanks guys!
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