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03-20-2012, 02:53 AM
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new page samples
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03-20-2012, 06:05 AM
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nice pages pre
 . ganda ng shot mo kay wolverine dito sa last panel , tsaka ung mga zombie mo talagang ayos, mukhang zombie, nakakatakot .
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03-20-2012, 06:58 AM
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Clan G33K$
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I see nipple. Can't do nudes on this site.
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03-20-2012, 09:16 AM
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03-20-2012, 09:18 AM
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03-20-2012, 11:22 AM
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Steve Colle, Editor
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Mannie, I guess the major question regarding the nudity is: Is it gratuitous or necessary in moving the story forward? Right now it seems like it was just thrown in there for the sake of showing nudity because the same effect could have been established with no "boobage" at all. Let's say, for example, that you were trying to submit this to Heavy Metal Magazine. Would nudity be a pre-requisite for publication? I don't think so.
Make the changes and (suggestion) start a new thread. I don't know if this one will be deleted for the obvious nudity, but you can catch it first. Steve |
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03-20-2012, 04:36 PM
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jeffo46
Join Date: Sep 2007
Location: Woonsocket,R.I.
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Shades of George Perez !!!! I like these pages . Nice detail and flow to them. I wouldn't mind inking these.
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03-21-2012, 08:10 AM
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03-21-2012, 10:11 PM
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Cartoonist
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Location: USA
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Don't delete it, whatever.
Would you mind posting a few pages from the script? I'd like to see what you're interpreting, not just for the tits and oddities therein, but also for some of the slower moments. Working on spec, as samples, mean working wordlessly--I'm curious to know what could be edited from these pages to make for better continuity, and seeing the script would be beneficial in that regard. Cheers, M |
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03-30-2012, 07:48 PM
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Nice. I especially like the headshot.
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03-30-2012, 10:41 PM
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apprentice of the pencil
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: utah
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all other comments aside..... and im not kidding here....
i totally thought the zombie was biting into her tittie there. seriously. maybe because its such an eye catcher in terms of "is that a boob?" seems outta place. (i know it was in the script) but because i was watching the boob so intently, thats what i thought he bit in to. wasnt CLEAR it was her shoulder. wasnt until later in the pages where we SEE her shoulder that i got it. and to be honest...i kinda liked the idea of zombie biting boob basically cause its weird, fucked up, and unexpected. the merits of whether its neseccary or not is for another discussion, but i liked the ballsy move of it....even though i saw it wrong. i love your art by the way. rob |
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07-09-2012, 05:41 AM
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thanks rob,Im glad you got where the zombie have biten her,he he he
Slothrop -thanks MattTriano-I dont think I can post the script here, you can ask avatar press for a sample I think. jeffo46- Im a big perez fan too. |
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07-11-2012, 08:26 PM
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Nice work--I can definitely see these inked.
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