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Old 02-10-2019, 11:10 AM   #1
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i start a new comics pages and i warm up with this drawings , some critics if you have

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Old 02-10-2019, 04:06 PM   #2
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Tricky to crit.
Not amazing (IMO) and not bad either.
Maybe just some more hard edges in the coloring, as not all shadows are soft.
And just abit more reference when possible.

And, I find some of your linework distracting. Mainly on their faces. Excessive lines on the faces can look like wrinkles/scars etc.
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yes at colors i know, i think i leave it flat colors beter then this soft shading, thank you for feedback
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and you can see a comics made by me https://www.scribd.com/document/3613...ind-o-Pe-Alice
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and you can see a comics made by me https://www.scribd.com/document/3613...ind-o-Pe-Alice
your storytelling is clear and easy to follow. as a cartoonist, you have a well defined point of view. i do think your finishes could use some polish but you are effective.
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