Spiderman

jeffo46 · 08-18-2012, 03:15 PM

Hi guys. I'm on a roll here. Here's a Spiderman meets Batman thingy I did today . I might end up inking it. as usual your crits are appreciated , so let er' rip.

Rob Norton · 08-18-2012, 04:53 PM

not a huge fan of his weird mutant feet...but otherwise its cool.

rob

jeffo46 · 08-19-2012, 06:12 AM

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Originally Posted by Rob Norton

not a huge fan of his weird mutant feet...but otherwise its cool.

rob

Thanks Rob. I've just started getting back into drawing after a couple of years away from the drawing board. I've been busy with my Classic Rock / 80's Metal band " Thunderlips ". Now that my wife and I are going to be parents soon of a 8 year old boy who loves comics, I have to rehone my skills so I can draw for him.

Juggertha · 08-19-2012, 11:39 PM

I like your rendering style, but yeah - those hands and feet need work.

cesare2009 · 08-21-2012, 10:21 AM

Hi, congrats on the adoption, unless I misunderstood? Very heartwarming.

My 2 cents for what its worth . . . you have to be very open minded and un-attached to your work. You've taken the time to do some nice rendering, but you didn't think through the structure of your main figure, his right wrist looks broken don't you think?

Take the time to lay down the structure, look objectively at your composition, you will improve by miles in no time.....

mikeorion22 · 08-21-2012, 02:57 PM

congratulations on getting back into drawing and the adoption ( i assume adoption, because giving birth to an 8 year old is tough work) try to be carful with your perspective it doesnt look like things are lining up in this piece and the batman one but good work

jeffo46 · 08-22-2012, 12:15 PM

I'm mostly a inker by trade having worked in the past for AC Comics but, seeing that I haven't done any drawing in almost 3 years, I got a lot of work ahead of me to get back to the level that I used to be at. Thanks for the crits as they are well appreciated.

08-18-2012, 03:15 PM	#1
jeffo46 jeffo46 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Woonsocket,R.I. Posts: 1,463	Spiderman Hi guys. I'm on a roll here. Here's a Spiderman meets Batman thingy I did today . I might end up inking it. as usual your crits are appreciated , so let er' rip.

08-21-2012, 10:21 AM	#5
cesare2009 The Natural Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Montreal, Qc Posts: 218	getting back into it Hi, congrats on the adoption, unless I misunderstood? Very heartwarming. My 2 cents for what its worth . . . you have to be very open minded and un-attached to your work. You've taken the time to do some nice rendering, but you didn't think through the structure of your main figure, his right wrist looks broken don't you think? Take the time to lay down the structure, look objectively at your composition, you will improve by miles in no time.....

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08-18-2012, 04:53 PM	#2
Rob Norton apprentice of the pencil Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: utah Posts: 2,750	not a huge fan of his weird mutant feet...but otherwise its cool. rob

08-19-2012, 11:39 PM	#4
Juggertha Registered User Join Date: Sep 2011 Location: Seoul, Korea Posts: 18	I like your rendering style, but yeah - those hands and feet need work.

08-21-2012, 02:57 PM	#6
mikeorion22 Registered User Join Date: Feb 2012 Location: rochester, ny Posts: 176	congratulations on getting back into drawing and the adoption ( i assume adoption, because giving birth to an 8 year old is tough work) try to be carful with your perspective it doesnt look like things are lining up in this piece and the batman one but good work

08-22-2012, 12:15 PM	#7
jeffo46 jeffo46 Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Woonsocket,R.I. Posts: 1,463	I'm mostly a inker by trade having worked in the past for AC Comics but, seeing that I haven't done any drawing in almost 3 years, I got a lot of work ahead of me to get back to the level that I used to be at. Thanks for the crits as they are well appreciated.