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Old 10-09-2018, 12:48 PM   #1
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This is a very nice page. All worked with care.
I think could be better for the audience if you add the gutters, separating panels for a better and easy reading. Right now I cannot tell where a panel ends and where the next start.
At some point, maybe panel 3, the main character should be closer for better identification.
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