weapon x

crazyjedichicken · 06-22-2012, 07:07 PM

just a quick (10-15min) sketch of weapon x! cheers for looking! any and all comments welcome and appreciated!

blackLight · 06-23-2012, 11:59 AM

Nice work! But I think his left forehand is too short.

Shep · 06-23-2012, 07:11 PM

A little beefy and the foreshortening needs some work but you're on the right track

brandnewday · 06-23-2012, 10:21 PM

you almost channeled liefeld.

crazyjedichicken · 06-24-2012, 06:22 AM

thanks for the replies guys!
Blacklight- his left or ours? i don't think either works too well but would love to know which looks better! cheers!
Shep-i like my wolverine a little chunky but i've been told recently all my drawings look a little "fat"! cheers for taking a look
Brandnewday- thats not a good thing is it...

cclements · 06-24-2012, 11:32 PM

I love the stubbiness of logan here, awesome take. It reminds me a lot of the way Akira Toriyama draws his characters in Dragon Ball. There's great foreshadowing on the upper body but it looks like you wimped out a bit/ got frustrated with the lower body, especially the legs.

blackLight · 06-25-2012, 10:43 AM

His left. Like Shep said the foreshortening on it looks wrong. And one more thing that I just noticed is his tights look too thin on his left leg (unless you want him wearing a g-string).

crazyjedichicken · 06-25-2012, 04:23 PM

i actually have a bad habit of drawing wolverine in g-strings...best not look too deeply into it! i did wimp out on the legs but this scan was only a progression scan incase i messed up! cheers for the replies lads! got some great pointers!

06-22-2012, 07:07 PM	#1
crazyjedichicken Registered User Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 36	weapon x just a quick (10-15min) sketch of weapon x! cheers for looking! any and all comments welcome and appreciated!

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06-23-2012, 11:59 AM	#2
blackLight Registered User Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 15	Nice work! But I think his left forehand is too short.

06-23-2012, 07:11 PM	#3
Shep Superman's Pal Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Massachusetts Posts: 422	A little beefy and the foreshortening needs some work but you're on the right track

06-23-2012, 10:21 PM	#4
brandnewday trondrake.deviantart.com Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: FL Posts: 377	you almost channeled liefeld.

06-24-2012, 06:22 AM	#5
crazyjedichicken Registered User Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 36	thanks for the replies guys! Blacklight- his left or ours? i don't think either works too well but would love to know which looks better! cheers! Shep-i like my wolverine a little chunky but i've been told recently all my drawings look a little "fat"! cheers for taking a look Brandnewday- thats not a good thing is it...

06-24-2012, 11:32 PM	#6
cclements Registered User Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Washington DC Posts: 33	I love the stubbiness of logan here, awesome take. It reminds me a lot of the way Akira Toriyama draws his characters in Dragon Ball. There's great foreshadowing on the upper body but it looks like you wimped out a bit/ got frustrated with the lower body, especially the legs.

06-25-2012, 10:43 AM	#7
blackLight Registered User Join Date: May 2012 Posts: 15	His left. Like Shep said the foreshortening on it looks wrong. And one more thing that I just noticed is his tights look too thin on his left leg (unless you want him wearing a g-string).

06-25-2012, 04:23 PM	#8
crazyjedichicken Registered User Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 36	i actually have a bad habit of drawing wolverine in g-strings...best not look too deeply into it! i did wimp out on the legs but this scan was only a progression scan incase i messed up! cheers for the replies lads! got some great pointers!