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Old 11-20-2018, 09:36 AM   #1
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Mortal Worlds graphic novel

Sample page from my upcoming comic Mortal Worlds (previously working titled 'Gods')

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Old 11-20-2018, 09:46 PM   #2
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Fun style.
Some of the black 'debris' is abit annoying/distracting.
Maybe remove a few pieces.
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This is cool. The designs of the characters have kind of a 90s action figure feel to them. In fact, the entire page seems like something that you'd see as either a mini comic pack-in or a cardback art that action figures used to have back in the day.
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YEAH, could see this with a MOTU or GI JOE mini comic.

They feel like a action cartoon
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This is cool. The designs of the characters have kind of a 90s action figure feel to them. In fact, the entire page seems like something that you'd see as either a mini comic pack-in or a cardback art that action figures used to have back in the day.
Thanks, I really did hope to capture that vibe!
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YEAH, could see this with a MOTU or GI JOE mini comic.

They feel like a action cartoon
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More finished inks

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you have alot of good stuff going on here. you have good anatomy, nice design, solid storytelling. however, the characters lack enough solidity, you have a black holding line but everything else comes off as grays. everything is lit as though no shadows exist and because of that the figures have a fuzzy quality to them. in my opinion, spend more time choosing a light source which would give the figures a more concrete feeling. even in high contrast art, blacks, whites and a sense of grays can exist depending on how one uses line and form. good stuff and good luck with your project.
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This is a lot of fun. Its like Gi Joe meets Basil Wolvertone meets Heavy Metal.
The color pic is pretty good. I like the pallet a lot.
I agree with artman about the need for some refining.
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