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Old 09-13-2017, 04:09 AM   #76
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Why does the girl with spiky wings and foreground person with third eye look very different btwn pnl 1 and pnl 3?

FYI pnl 2 closeup of dragon-ie monster is hard to distinguish from pnl 1 and 3 -- black borders and black background and odd head crop and not being set up in first pnl hurts clarity

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Old 09-13-2017, 05:23 PM   #77
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Why does the girl with spiky wings and foreground person with third eye look very different btwn pnl 1 and pnl 3?

FYI pnl 2 closeup of dragon-ie monster is hard to distinguish from pnl 1 and 3 -- black borders and black background and odd head crop and not being set up in first pnl hurts clarity

Congrats on other work!
totally agree with all those points.

especially the BLACK BORDER problem that I mentioned earlier in my other comment some time back. it REALLY hurts the separation of panels and is really confusing.

I still enjoy this project and your passion for it. these issues mentioned just kinda hold it back and its unfortunate.
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