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Old 05-28-2018, 02:48 PM   #31
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mostly finished page. needs digital clean up and stuff.... this is a re draw of the original page I did like 9 years ago...

page 1 of this whole thing...





and this is page 7. another redraw. the original was just terrible. not that this is perfect..but..its much more effective for what it needs to be. more dramatic. STIIILLLL putting this thing together... its gonna be sweet. I think. I hope.

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Old 06-24-2018, 12:25 PM   #32
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more stuff. several of these pages are redraws from stuff I did years ago on this thing..that just have to be done better.
like this first image, its the first time She-ra is seen in the story, and Ive redrawn this page 5 times. this is my most recent attempt. its still wonky but its better by far that the last several. some touch up and it will be good enough.

and following it are a few more pages from the She-ra portion of the story..









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Old 06-24-2018, 12:29 PM   #33
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and a redo of Teela reborn as the scorceress. gotta fix her hands...




and He-man, after getting his horribly scarred body healed...

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inks in progress...






and inks finished on this one..

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The storytelling reads well enough without words but the use of space is not optimized for a comic featuring words. It feels much more like a poster series glorifying the art instead of moving a story along. I would like to see how you fare in non-fight quiet scenes, dialogues, talking heads and so on.

It seems that it's Man-at-Arms and not He-Man ripping Skeletor's heart but it's not clear enough at first glance. You need a few more establishing shots to clarify everything so that we "remember" that Man-at-Arms is around.

He-Man's reaction to seeing the Sorceress on the ground makes it seems he's the one approaching and ripping the heart from Skeletor.
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The storytelling reads well enough without words but the use of space is not optimized for a comic featuring words. It feels much more like a poster series glorifying the art instead of moving a story along. I would like to see how you fare in non-fight quiet scenes, dialogues, talking heads and so on.

It seems that it's Man-at-Arms and not He-Man ripping Skeletor's heart but it's not clear enough at first glance. You need a few more establishing shots to clarify everything so that we "remember" that Man-at-Arms is around.

He-Man's reaction to seeing the Sorceress on the ground makes it seems he's the one approaching and ripping the heart from Skeletor.

hey sir. I appreciate the feedback for sure. to address some of your points...

this isn't listed in 100% sequential order..and that is probably throwing off some of the story you are trying to follow. ive just been putting up random pages...SOME in order. for instance..man-at arms is only in like..3 pages and dies right at the beginning...he is nowhere near the final battle where he-man rips out skeletors heart. so I do apologize for the confusion... but yeah...these aren't in order at all. it IS He-man that rips skeletors heart out.

and I agree that from a visual sense...it would seem to be art focused. cant deny that cause I'm an artist first and am completely drawing this to make it visually what I would find interesting and fun. I DO try to keep in mind lettering and word to be added..which it will.. but it is always a struggle to make it right. its something I need to pay more attention to..

as far as seeing work from me where there is less action stuff... its funny you mention that..because as I keep working on this...which I am at all times.. I'm written tons of smaller stories that follow all of whats seen here. this stuff is basically at the front of the whole story..and the following stuff is MUCH more story oriented/talking heads. so much so..that as I was writing all these short stories..i started thinking I need to add a little more action to it...to keep some people attention as is goes along...because people may not find the STORY parts that I'm finding so interesting as compelling as I do.
but here is a link to a thread that I put up here in Digitalwebbing..its kinda buried a bit..so rather than searching it out.. you can just click here. its a cop story with a lot of slow quiet talking stuff at the beginning. I know I have a lot to learn... but I'm trying...
http://www.digitalwebbing.com/forums...d.php?t=180369

anyway...thank you for the thoughts and crits.. ill keep it all in mind as I try to wrap this thing up...

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I like these other pages a lot! I apologize for writing this but the other material is a much better highlight of your skills than the pure action/fantasy stuff with masters of the Universe and Voltron.
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I like these other pages a lot! I apologize for writing this but the other material is a much better highlight of your skills than the pure action/fantasy stuff with masters of the Universe and Voltron.
I appreciate that and i do understand... but the heman stuff is just so much more fun. And thats my focus now. Fun! When its all put together, i think it will read well. I hope anyway...

Again..thank you!
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more pages... from the end of the first arc where he-man is healed and returns to the world as a hero...




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more stuff...
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