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Old 11-27-2017, 07:20 AM   #1
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New Samples

Hello guys. I really put all of your critiques into consideration in my last art and Here is my last sequential samples.

Pencil straight to colors. No inks

I do the pencils and colors too so I hope you can also critique me in the colors. Thanks a lot XD.



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Old 11-27-2017, 09:56 AM   #2
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Really nice. Only thing I'd say is the jacket folds on the old guy, maybe try taking photos of yourself wearing a jacket to have reference. Panel 3 he has a hump on his shoulders.

Well done.
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Old 11-28-2017, 10:30 PM   #3
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These are pretty nice but I think I like those other pages a little bit better. I have never been a big fan of going to colors straight over the pencils except in very few extreme cases.

I don’t think it works as well but that’s just my preference.

I like these overall but I would’ve never guessed that that was wolverine in any way until his claws popped out. That may not matter because he may have been supposed to of been in disguise or something but it just doesn’t look like the character.

I also agree that the fold on the jacket look completely faked and need some reworking to show some kind of reference to make them look a little bit more realistic and believable.

There is a point where it just looks to fake and weird.
Overall I like the action and the colors are not too bad at all. Very nice. Keep posting. Also come join the group project we are all working on.
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Old 11-29-2017, 04:26 AM   #4
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Thanks a lot guys. Yeah drapery is such a pain for me lol. Will definitely improving my drapery soon XD.

Really want to join your group project bro. What is it called?
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Thanks a lot guys. Yeah drapery is such a pain for me lol. Will definitely improving my drapery soon XD.

Really want to join your group project bro. What is it called?
check out the "creator community" forum and the sub forum "DW group project" or whatever its called and read thru whats been discussed

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