Sequentials...

DanielPicci · 06-26-2012, 06:22 AM

Did these for some trials. Had a very strict deadline and turned them out in 3 days. I knew the quality of my art would drop, but instead tried to tell as clear a story as possible...alas not my best work, but ok for 3 days.

Cloves Rodrigues · 06-26-2012, 07:55 AM

for avatar right?
man this samples looks like very good for me !

( my tips is: more attention for drawing hands... )

Congratulations !

iRacingRyan · 06-26-2012, 04:57 PM

Oh, very cool! Is there a script floating around to compare these against or is this something of your creation?

DanielPicci · 07-03-2012, 09:53 AM

Cloves - Yes they were. Thanks for your comment and the feedback

iRacingRyan - Id place the script here but not sure if id be allowed?

http://danielpicciotto.deviantart.com/

mannie abeleda · 07-04-2012, 10:33 AM

cool pages dan, I drew the same sample pages for avatar too.

mannieboy.deviantart.com

DanielPicci · 07-04-2012, 10:46 PM

Thanks Mannie....did you hear back from them?

mannie abeleda · 07-07-2012, 08:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by DanielPicci

Thanks Mannie....did you hear back from them?

naaah not even a rejection slip

Scribbly · 07-07-2012, 08:26 AM

Daniel, these pages are terrific.
The storytelling works very well.

I don't know if this is going to help, but the CEO at Avatar press told me
(In one of these NYCC weekends) that what he want is hyper realistic figures and
extreme dedication on detail and finishing of panels.
As the artists that are working for him usually will do.
Not my cup of tea, but I know you can do this very well.
Maybe, using these same pages as sketches and redoing each in a more finished and
elaborated way would make it.(maybe inking it?)

thejaz180 · 07-07-2012, 12:07 PM

Awesome.

DanielPicci · 07-08-2012, 05:08 AM

Mannie - damn

(

Scribbly - Always great to hear your feedback

. That does sound right because he emailed me and said there 'wasnt enough detail, particulalry in the faces'. I do normally like to play with my detail, and dont really feel like a page is finished until ive added as much as I can without making it cluttered, but I was on a strict deadline and it wasnt feasible for me, particularly being an as yet unpublished artist. I would of really loved the opportunity to get hired, and through experience devise a routine to become fast, and then add more detail.

I will redo the pages, and/or others with more detail and more polished.

Jaz - Thanks brother!

Best

http://danielpicciotto.deviantart.com/

ArminOzdic · 07-08-2012, 06:08 PM

Nicely done!I really like first panel on first page!
It does seem rushed on some parts,but overall it looks good!
too bad you didnt get hired!
How I can contact Avatar editor..by some email or?I would love to take a crack at some zombie sample script!

06-26-2012, 06:22 AM	#1
DanielPicci Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 286	Sequentials... Did these for some trials. Had a very strict deadline and turned them out in 3 days. I knew the quality of my art would drop, but instead tried to tell as clear a story as possible...alas not my best work, but ok for 3 days.

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06-26-2012, 07:55 AM	#2
Cloves Rodrigues oficinadobill.wordpress Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Brazil ! Posts: 569	for avatar right? man this samples looks like very good for me ! ( my tips is: more attention for drawing hands... ) Congratulations !

06-26-2012, 04:57 PM	#3
iRacingRyan Almost famous. Almost. Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Delaware Posts: 16	Oh, very cool! Is there a script floating around to compare these against or is this something of your creation?

07-03-2012, 09:53 AM	#4
DanielPicci Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 286	Cloves - Yes they were. Thanks for your comment and the feedback iRacingRyan - Id place the script here but not sure if id be allowed? http://danielpicciotto.deviantart.com/

07-04-2012, 10:33 AM	#5
mannie abeleda Registered User Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 76	cool pages dan, I drew the same sample pages for avatar too. mannieboy.deviantart.com

07-04-2012, 10:46 PM	#6
DanielPicci Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 286	Thanks Mannie....did you hear back from them?

07-07-2012, 08:26 AM	#8
Scribbly Easy Reader Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Amerika Posts: 3,736	Daniel, these pages are terrific. The storytelling works very well. I don't know if this is going to help, but the CEO at Avatar press told me (In one of these NYCC weekends) that what he want is hyper realistic figures and extreme dedication on detail and finishing of panels. As the artists that are working for him usually will do. Not my cup of tea, but I know you can do this very well. Maybe, using these same pages as sketches and redoing each in a more finished and elaborated way would make it.(maybe inking it?)

07-07-2012, 12:07 PM	#9
thejaz180 The artist from Brooklyn Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Brooklyn, NY Posts: 2,509	Awesome.

07-08-2012, 05:08 AM	#10
DanielPicci Registered User Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 286	Mannie - damn ( Scribbly - Always great to hear your feedback . That does sound right because he emailed me and said there 'wasnt enough detail, particulalry in the faces'. I do normally like to play with my detail, and dont really feel like a page is finished until ive added as much as I can without making it cluttered, but I was on a strict deadline and it wasnt feasible for me, particularly being an as yet unpublished artist. I would of really loved the opportunity to get hired, and through experience devise a routine to become fast, and then add more detail. I will redo the pages, and/or others with more detail and more polished. Jaz - Thanks brother! Best http://danielpicciotto.deviantart.com/

07-08-2012, 06:08 PM	#11
ArminOzdic Registered User Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Sarajevo,BiH Posts: 79	Nicely done!I really like first panel on first page! It does seem rushed on some parts,but overall it looks good! too bad you didnt get hired! How I can contact Avatar editor..by some email or?I would love to take a crack at some zombie sample script!