Assassin colors

[C_Lawson]

This is my second experiment using manga studio EX for coloring. The line work here is by Nico Lopez and will appear in a graphic novel we working on for arcana. I did this test page because I'm considering trying to do the coloring myself. Any feedback is welcome.

[the machine]

First impression is that it's cool.

It feels like you missed an opportunity to really showoff using a stronger light source however. his knee and arm that are sticking out could really use some light being shed on them and keep the rest of him in darkness. Tone down the gold armor too. The blue pillars are a bit too saturated. also try and keep your light source to one direction. It's a bit all over the place as is.

I hope that helps.