Wolvy

comic_assist · 05-04-2012, 12:02 PM

Drawing practice #3

Comments and Critics please.

iRacingRyan · 05-04-2012, 03:30 PM

I'm not an artist, but at a glance:

Overall, not bad in the slightest. I feel as though his neck seems too strained/ripped. Feels like he's flexing. Something about the abdominal area seems slightly off/over-rotated. A bit too much shading underneath his pec on one side, but not the other. Perhaps too much in the pec region, by comparison to the other areas.

His claws, in my opinion, should be able to fit within his forearms. Yours seem slightly too long.

All in all, I think your skills are pretty awesome. The body is rendered proportionally in my opinion. I wish I could draw with your level of skills, but alas, I can only type.

comic_assist · 05-05-2012, 09:29 AM

Thanks IracingRyan,

I'll take note all of that. On the abs, so correct that it looks so off and I was trying to figure and that maybe with the incorrect proportion of the pec. The rest, I'll be careful of those soon.

Thanks for dropping by.

05-04-2012, 12:02 PM	#1
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05-04-2012, 03:30 PM	#2
iRacingRyan Almost famous. Almost. Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: Delaware Posts: 16	I'm not an artist, but at a glance: Overall, not bad in the slightest. I feel as though his neck seems too strained/ripped. Feels like he's flexing. Something about the abdominal area seems slightly off/over-rotated. A bit too much shading underneath his pec on one side, but not the other. Perhaps too much in the pec region, by comparison to the other areas. His claws, in my opinion, should be able to fit within his forearms. Yours seem slightly too long. All in all, I think your skills are pretty awesome. The body is rendered proportionally in my opinion. I wish I could draw with your level of skills, but alas, I can only type.

05-05-2012, 09:29 AM	#3
comic_assist Registered User Join Date: Apr 2012 Posts: 18	Thanks IracingRyan, I'll take note all of that. On the abs, so correct that it looks so off and I was trying to figure and that maybe with the incorrect proportion of the pec. The rest, I'll be careful of those soon. Thanks for dropping by.