Hulk #20, pg12

Jeremy Colwell · 03-08-2012, 08:12 PM

Another page from the set Marvel sent me for tryout.
Penciller: Ed McGuinness
Inker: Mark Farmer

thejaz180 · 03-08-2012, 09:14 PM

Cool looking colors.

MattTriano · 03-08-2012, 11:28 PM

Everything feels highlighted, like it's lightly glowing; they may not give you work for even something as minor as that. Beast's fur, Cyclops' visor, Hulk's abs, the blades of grass--light won't reflect in the same way from each, but they all sort of feel 'present' in the foreground and important all at once. Makes it difficult for the reader to rest their eyes. Technique is lovely, but color theory is confusing--what am I meant to feel about this scene? You're the guy out of all the team who can set the tone most clearly, or completely ruin it.
You haven't done the latter here, but it could be still better defined.
Thanks for sharing, would love to see more!
Cheers,
M

Jeremy Colwell · 03-09-2012, 01:11 PM

Thanks guys. Taking in your crit, Matt, and others I got on Gutterzombie, I made these revisions. Tried to address the glows, focus and night feeling.

thejaz180 · 03-09-2012, 01:24 PM

There you go, cool.

Jeremy Colwell · 03-09-2012, 06:37 PM

Thanks, Jaz.

03-08-2012, 08:12 PM	#1
Jeremy Colwell colwellillustration.com Join Date: May 2004 Location: Vancouver, WA Posts: 978	Hulk #20, pg12 Another page from the set Marvel sent me for tryout. Penciller: Ed McGuinness Inker: Mark Farmer

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03-08-2012, 09:14 PM	#2
thejaz180 The artist from Brooklyn Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Brooklyn, NY Posts: 2,509	Cool looking colors.

03-08-2012, 11:28 PM	#3
MattTriano Cartoonist Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: USA Posts: 103	Everything feels highlighted, like it's lightly glowing; they may not give you work for even something as minor as that. Beast's fur, Cyclops' visor, Hulk's abs, the blades of grass--light won't reflect in the same way from each, but they all sort of feel 'present' in the foreground and important all at once. Makes it difficult for the reader to rest their eyes. Technique is lovely, but color theory is confusing--what am I meant to feel about this scene? You're the guy out of all the team who can set the tone most clearly, or completely ruin it. You haven't done the latter here, but it could be still better defined. Thanks for sharing, would love to see more! Cheers, M

03-09-2012, 01:11 PM	#4
Jeremy Colwell colwellillustration.com Join Date: May 2004 Location: Vancouver, WA Posts: 978	Thanks guys. Taking in your crit, Matt, and others I got on Gutterzombie, I made these revisions. Tried to address the glows, focus and night feeling.

03-09-2012, 01:24 PM	#5
thejaz180 The artist from Brooklyn Join Date: Oct 2011 Location: Brooklyn, NY Posts: 2,509	There you go, cool.

03-09-2012, 06:37 PM	#6
Jeremy Colwell colwellillustration.com Join Date: May 2004 Location: Vancouver, WA Posts: 978	Thanks, Jaz.