Freestyle Thread: The New Year Edition

Shin_Jinlaw · 12-31-2007, 01:22 PM

Post your rhymes here.

For my man Cupil....

I got money on my mind, and mind on some honey
I liked what you spitted, but real talk dawg
Your level of what you call "fire" is baloney
I don't warp the Matrix world
Not only do I manipulate it, but I can treat you like spam
Delete it.....ashes to dust (whoo!)
Like a cherry pie to a graham cracker crust
Flow sweeter, sick beats and rhyme
I can get your girl's pelvic to thrust
A blastimus/ I'm hazardous on the game
Crack fiendish, and that's my free will
It's not like I choose to be ill, because I try to rock skill
I don't have to take the red or blue pill
Because I chose to take the green pill
Got boys wondering in the neighborhood asking
Yo Nu Jin, you just put your hand in the air, what's the deal?
Stun you like brain freeze, and the battle is just beginning
*Sits in a meditating Genocidial stance*
Because there's no chance of you winning

Fred Duran · 12-31-2007, 01:58 PM

I'm not out to win, only to make some noise,
Without the use of Matrix analogies or neighborhood boys.
But even still, in this head of mine is a den of rhymes,
That would definitely make holdin' a pen a crime,
Let alone puttin' the tip to paper, that's insane,
Cuz you'd get 20 to life for just writin' your name.
So imagine what you'd get for writin' a rhyme,
You could be in your genocidial stance and still do less time.
Sublime? Maybe. I'm spittin' straight this time,
Perfect? Almost, so you can rate me "9".
Or if you're feelin' generous, you can rate me "10",
At which point I'll thank you and your round will come up again,
And the battle will continue unabated and undeterred,
Two grand master warriors of the rhyming word,
Tradin' verbal jabs and lyrical attacks,
Tryin' to see who's crack, and conversely, who's whack,
But I deal with absolutes, so I must be on the Dark Side,
An unfortunate result of my training with The Dark Mind,
In summation, they always say justice is blind,
But in this rap game, it's poetic justice, and it's rhyme.

Shin_Jinlaw · 12-31-2007, 02:44 PM

Sick man....just sick!!

(Rhyme inspired by the beat "Second Round KO" by Canibus)

Yo....

I slay worlds with pens
Yeah/ I write rhymes with the Matrix analogy
And you expect me to pay my dues with an apology?
I'll admit, saying you won't win may be big talk
This journey that I'm taking now
I have to chalk it up in experience, and make that walk
With that out of the way
I try to rhyme non-lyrically
I flow spiritually/ These brothas don't hear me
I may spit intelligently/ Grammar with loose language
Feelin' Me?
Real talk, they're killin' me
But this warrior won't die
Genocidial tendices. When I'm in that mode
It's like (real talk) man, woman, or child
I don't care who's in this world/ Slash katanas
Decapitations would be a ritual, and yes with the Matrix visuals
You won't see blue or green
But me in your after-life in red, killing you
The results of the Keysi training meditational
Take blows, absorb, wait for the openeing
And leave you in a bloody mess without hestation
And send you to your death destination
Note this....
I don't care who's feelin' this, or who's hearing this
When my intelligence is contested
I don't care what graduate school you came from
Or what degree you major in
Unless you provide me a link
The burden of proof is on you

(Didn't rhyme at all. The beat ended)

rummblestrips · 12-31-2007, 03:12 PM

I am a tree
and I'm happy as can be
That's why I'm a tree

Shin_Jinlaw · 12-31-2007, 03:44 PM

(Inspired from the baet "How You Feel" by Nujabes, Fat Jon, and Me)

Yo....

For real. I had to calm down. Lay in the grassy fields for this. I was contemplating this in my mind. Well...let me explain...

A calm before the wind of all sorts
I'm talking like a regular human being
But to me you are a goddess of all sorts
Write you in my book of life like a good report
Now I'm resorting all the fantasies from when I was a child
I grew up from a life of which some may not understand
Remembering when you stood beside me then
Took my hand, pulled me by your side, and we just danced
When I looked into your eyes, heaven knew at the time
That you were a godsend
To describe you further, it started from your rare personality
Nobody didn't understand you like the way I did
Because I don't care about your nationality
That's reality-never bites
From your eyes, it just flowed from there
I know it's not nice to stare, but let's keep it real
Your body's vicious
Your personality is non-ficticious
Your smell is like a vanilla-bean Ice Cream
Two scoops of eight essential vitamins and minerals
Delicious
Like Rummble Strips/ Her love is that Ambitious
Packing heat like ammunition
The only thing I can do for now
Is just lay my head down to rest
And just think of nothing but the best
Memories.......
About How You Feel *echoes*

Fred Duran · 01-01-2008, 02:45 PM

You have an amazing grasp of imagery there my man. I can see those animated watercolor painting things that they put on commercials of pretty much everything going on there

You're talkin' like you're a human being of the norm,
Talkin' 'bout the calm before the wind when it's really me who's the storm,
I'm rhymin' without beats, goin' a capella,
Stoppin' fellas real quick, I gots to tell ya,
My mere words alone can turn a man to Jell-O,
Meanwhile, I keep myself calm and mellow,
Signs of lyrical genius abound, as rhymes seemingly come up out of the ground,
And circle around until you're completely surrounded by sound,
But never fear for your life, cuz although this pen is sharper than a knife,
It's only used for cuttin' off mental eyelids to give fools their sight,
Heavenly duty? Maybe . . . perhaps,
God knows there's gotta be a reason for these smoothly-spit raps,
Other than the entertainment of the masses,
As I spit to beat-boxin' in the halls between classes,
Renderin' hall passes useless as kids forget the time,
Waitin' not-so-patiently for their chance to get to rhyme,
But my flow never ends, I just put in commas,
And pick up where I left off puttin' your heart into trauma,
I'm better than the best of the best, you can wear a vest,
But my words'll go straight through to your chest and give you cardiac arrest,
And when you wake up you'll realize you couldn't beat this obstacle,
Findin' yourself hooked up to machines in the local hospital,
Just kiddin', that's messed up, I know, it's true,
I'd kill a mo-fugger if he did that crap to you,
DW-ers unite, stick together, and don't be runnin',
Stand and fight, cuz accordin to J. Dahl, the zombies are comin'.

Shin_Jinlaw · 01-02-2008, 12:16 PM

That last bar was hot dawg! You are a gifted rhymist to!

I said earlier that I have to step up my game
Never had to try to claim my fame
Because no matter where I go in life
Everything seems the same
People dubbed me lame, and in most cases, insane
Yeah I said I'm rhyming like a human being in the norm
But if you are a home boy who's claiming he's the strom
Then I'm a genocide who'll come straight out of the sky
And bring the wrath of the genocide
Like the second coming of christ
Does it make it right?
Philosophical/ My body's built like it's unstoppable
But they don't know the interior
Judging like I'm the superior, but it may seems unprobable
I'm a man of most, inhabitable with a spiritual host
Anger get's to most when they're trying to spit baseless boast
But in reality, wishing I would turn them into ghost
And they be looking at themselves get stomped
Laying in either a ditch, or in a trash dumpster
Leaving their body in a bloody slope
Punks running scared like "This *igga is flucked up on dope!"
Realizing that it is NOT fun staring at the end of a gun barrel
While I pull the cookie cutter, looking through the sniper scope
Colors would be like the collidascope/ The last thing you'll hear
Will not be red, white, or blue
Or hut one, or two
But me standing over YOU saying "Mothaflucka FLUCK YOU!!"
Now I'm piss.......

(But really I'm not!!

)

Comix Obsession · 01-02-2008, 04:46 PM

Rhymist? Gifted? Nah, I ain't that,
I say 'ain't' like I know what I'm getting at,
But I don't, and I ain't, and I'm not sure what I'm saying,
And it's lucky I'm not speaking or my tea it would be spraying,
Yeah that's right, drinking tea, cause it's all about refreshment,
Got no rhyme, got the time, just lacking the digestment,
In my stomach, all the churning up of rhymes and words and spelling,
Man this rhyme is really getting stale, could say that it's smelling,
Yeah that fits, like your laughter, got you all up there in stitches,
Not intentional, I'll be gangster, and say you mockers all are bitches!

Shin_Jinlaw · 01-02-2008, 04:58 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Comix Obsession

Rhymist? Gifted? Nah, I ain't that,
I say 'ain't' like I know what I'm getting at,
But I don't, and I ain't, and I'm not sure what I'm saying,
And it's lucky I'm not speaking or my tea it would be spraying,
Yeah that's right, drinking tea, cause it's all about refreshment,
Got no rhyme, got the time, just lacking the digestment,
In my stomach, all the churning up of rhymes and words and spelling,
Man this rhyme is really getting stale, could say that it's smelling,
Yeah that fits, like your laughter, got you all up there in stitches,
Not intentional, I'll be gangster, and say you mockers all are bitches!

W. Smith · 01-02-2008, 05:28 PM

gonna hafta just make do,
this new year still real blue
Ain't got no luck at all
Can't seem to be on the ball
Always on the brink of a fall
Gonna hafta just make do

Gonna hafta just make do
Life still sux, nothing new
Even my kids down on me
Mabye I should just leave
Got No interest , but we'll see
Gonna hafta just make do

Gonna hafta just make do
bad luck seems to come in twos
Man on my neck, beating down
Life's dying out of this town
Need a change, a happier clown
Gonna hafta just make do

Gonna hafta just make do
out options or at least too few
slowly dying, just existin'
Hope's a lady she ain'tlistenin'
used to it, but still adjustin'
Gonna hafta just make do.

Gonna hafta just make do
Paying the devil all his due
This prob'ly aint in hell yet
don't matter wit all my debts
Can't get out of it on a bet
Gonna hafta just make do.

Comix Obsession · 01-03-2008, 05:20 PM

THIS is how it's done bad boys...

Fred Duran · 01-03-2008, 05:42 PM

That was hysterical! "I'm the Hiphopopotamus, my rhymes are bottomless . . ." and he stops rhyming

priceless!

Comix Obsession · 01-04-2008, 03:17 PM

That's from 'Flight of The Conchords' - utter genius - if you get a chance, just buy it, every episode is that good! Check them out on Youtube, you'll find clips from their shows and clips of them live. Seriously amazing comedy duo.

Shin_Jinlaw · 01-04-2008, 03:50 PM

You want freestyles?

Taking a break for a minute from freestyling.

These are my home boys. I'm nowhere near their level. But check it out (especially you Cupil)

Freestyle

Comix Obsession · 01-05-2008, 12:04 PM

Check out Jermaine's (aka the 'Hiphopapotamus') freestyle during this live version of their track, 'Hiphopopotamus vs. Rhymenoceros'!

I'm at that level, roughly...

12-31-2007, 01:22 PM	#1
Shin_Jinlaw Video Game crack fiend!! Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Video Game Crack House. Soon will cease all outside contact when MGS4 comes out. Posts: 387	Freestyle Thread: The New Year Edition Post your rhymes here. For my man Cupil.... I got money on my mind, and mind on some honey I liked what you spitted, but real talk dawg Your level of what you call "fire" is baloney I don't warp the Matrix world Not only do I manipulate it, but I can treat you like spam Delete it.....ashes to dust (whoo!) Like a cherry pie to a graham cracker crust Flow sweeter, sick beats and rhyme I can get your girl's pelvic to thrust A blastimus/ I'm hazardous on the game Crack fiendish, and that's my free will It's not like I choose to be ill, because I try to rock skill I don't have to take the red or blue pill Because I chose to take the green pill Got boys wondering in the neighborhood asking Yo Nu Jin, you just put your hand in the air, what's the deal? Stun you like brain freeze, and the battle is just beginning Sits in a meditating Genocidial stance Because there's no chance of you winning

01-01-2008, 02:45 PM	#6
Fred Duran Master Lurker Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Manhattan Posts: 760	You have an amazing grasp of imagery there my man. I can see those animated watercolor painting things that they put on commercials of pretty much everything going on there You're talkin' like you're a human being of the norm, Talkin' 'bout the calm before the wind when it's really me who's the storm, I'm rhymin' without beats, goin' a capella, Stoppin' fellas real quick, I gots to tell ya, My mere words alone can turn a man to Jell-O, Meanwhile, I keep myself calm and mellow, Signs of lyrical genius abound, as rhymes seemingly come up out of the ground, And circle around until you're completely surrounded by sound, But never fear for your life, cuz although this pen is sharper than a knife, It's only used for cuttin' off mental eyelids to give fools their sight, Heavenly duty? Maybe . . . perhaps, God knows there's gotta be a reason for these smoothly-spit raps, Other than the entertainment of the masses, As I spit to beat-boxin' in the halls between classes, Renderin' hall passes useless as kids forget the time, Waitin' not-so-patiently for their chance to get to rhyme, But my flow never ends, I just put in commas, And pick up where I left off puttin' your heart into trauma, I'm better than the best of the best, you can wear a vest, But my words'll go straight through to your chest and give you cardiac arrest, And when you wake up you'll realize you couldn't beat this obstacle, Findin' yourself hooked up to machines in the local hospital, Just kiddin', that's messed up, I know, it's true, I'd kill a mo-fugger if he did that crap to you, DW-ers unite, stick together, and don't be runnin', Stand and fight, cuz accordin to J. Dahl, the zombies are comin'. Last edited by Fred Duran; 01-01-2008 at 02:48 PM.

01-02-2008, 04:46 PM	#8
Comix Obsession Missing In In-Action Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Southend, UK Posts: 1,847	Rhymist? Gifted? Nah, I ain't that, I say 'ain't' like I know what I'm getting at, But I don't, and I ain't, and I'm not sure what I'm saying, And it's lucky I'm not speaking or my tea it would be spraying, Yeah that's right, drinking tea, cause it's all about refreshment, Got no rhyme, got the time, just lacking the digestment, In my stomach, all the churning up of rhymes and words and spelling, Man this rhyme is really getting stale, could say that it's smelling, Yeah that fits, like your laughter, got you all up there in stitches, Not intentional, I'll be gangster, and say you mockers all are bitches! Last edited by Comix Obsession; 01-02-2008 at 04:49 PM.

01-02-2008, 05:28 PM	#10
W. Smith W. Smith Publications Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: DFW TX Posts: 108	gonna hafta just make do, this new year still real blue Ain't got no luck at all Can't seem to be on the ball Always on the brink of a fall Gonna hafta just make do Gonna hafta just make do Life still sux, nothing new Even my kids down on me Mabye I should just leave Got No interest , but we'll see Gonna hafta just make do Gonna hafta just make do bad luck seems to come in twos Man on my neck, beating down Life's dying out of this town Need a change, a happier clown Gonna hafta just make do Gonna hafta just make do out options or at least too few slowly dying, just existin' Hope's a lady she ain'tlistenin' used to it, but still adjustin' Gonna hafta just make do. Gonna hafta just make do Paying the devil all his due This prob'ly aint in hell yet don't matter wit all my debts Can't get out of it on a bet Gonna hafta just make do. Last edited by W. Smith; 01-02-2008 at 05:30 PM.

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12-31-2007, 01:58 PM	#2
Fred Duran Master Lurker Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Manhattan Posts: 760	I'm not out to win, only to make some noise, Without the use of Matrix analogies or neighborhood boys. But even still, in this head of mine is a den of rhymes, That would definitely make holdin' a pen a crime, Let alone puttin' the tip to paper, that's insane, Cuz you'd get 20 to life for just writin' your name. So imagine what you'd get for writin' a rhyme, You could be in your genocidial stance and still do less time. Sublime? Maybe. I'm spittin' straight this time, Perfect? Almost, so you can rate me "9". Or if you're feelin' generous, you can rate me "10", At which point I'll thank you and your round will come up again, And the battle will continue unabated and undeterred, Two grand master warriors of the rhyming word, Tradin' verbal jabs and lyrical attacks, Tryin' to see who's crack, and conversely, who's whack, But I deal with absolutes, so I must be on the Dark Side, An unfortunate result of my training with The Dark Mind, In summation, they always say justice is blind, But in this rap game, it's poetic justice, and it's rhyme.

12-31-2007, 02:44 PM	#3
Shin_Jinlaw Video Game crack fiend!! Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Video Game Crack House. Soon will cease all outside contact when MGS4 comes out. Posts: 387	Sick man....just sick!! (Rhyme inspired by the beat "Second Round KO" by Canibus) Yo.... I slay worlds with pens Yeah/ I write rhymes with the Matrix analogy And you expect me to pay my dues with an apology? I'll admit, saying you won't win may be big talk This journey that I'm taking now I have to chalk it up in experience, and make that walk With that out of the way I try to rhyme non-lyrically I flow spiritually/ These brothas don't hear me I may spit intelligently/ Grammar with loose language Feelin' Me? Real talk, they're killin' me But this warrior won't die Genocidial tendices. When I'm in that mode It's like (real talk) man, woman, or child I don't care who's in this world/ Slash katanas Decapitations would be a ritual, and yes with the Matrix visuals You won't see blue or green But me in your after-life in red, killing you The results of the Keysi training meditational Take blows, absorb, wait for the openeing And leave you in a bloody mess without hestation And send you to your death destination Note this.... I don't care who's feelin' this, or who's hearing this When my intelligence is contested I don't care what graduate school you came from Or what degree you major in Unless you provide me a link The burden of proof is on you (Didn't rhyme at all. The beat ended)

12-31-2007, 03:12 PM	#4
rummblestrips Moderately content Join Date: Oct 2002 Location: sitting on my watch, so I can be on time Posts: 1,759	I am a tree and I'm happy as can be That's why I'm a tree

12-31-2007, 03:44 PM	#5
Shin_Jinlaw Video Game crack fiend!! Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Video Game Crack House. Soon will cease all outside contact when MGS4 comes out. Posts: 387	(Inspired from the baet "How You Feel" by Nujabes, Fat Jon, and Me) Yo.... For real. I had to calm down. Lay in the grassy fields for this. I was contemplating this in my mind. Well...let me explain... A calm before the wind of all sorts I'm talking like a regular human being But to me you are a goddess of all sorts Write you in my book of life like a good report Now I'm resorting all the fantasies from when I was a child I grew up from a life of which some may not understand Remembering when you stood beside me then Took my hand, pulled me by your side, and we just danced When I looked into your eyes, heaven knew at the time That you were a godsend To describe you further, it started from your rare personality Nobody didn't understand you like the way I did Because I don't care about your nationality That's reality-never bites From your eyes, it just flowed from there I know it's not nice to stare, but let's keep it real Your body's vicious Your personality is non-ficticious Your smell is like a vanilla-bean Ice Cream Two scoops of eight essential vitamins and minerals Delicious Like Rummble Strips/ Her love is that Ambitious Packing heat like ammunition The only thing I can do for now Is just lay my head down to rest And just think of nothing but the best Memories....... About How You Feel echoes

01-02-2008, 12:16 PM	#7
Shin_Jinlaw Video Game crack fiend!! Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Video Game Crack House. Soon will cease all outside contact when MGS4 comes out. Posts: 387	That last bar was hot dawg! You are a gifted rhymist to! I said earlier that I have to step up my game Never had to try to claim my fame Because no matter where I go in life Everything seems the same People dubbed me lame, and in most cases, insane Yeah I said I'm rhyming like a human being in the norm But if you are a home boy who's claiming he's the strom Then I'm a genocide who'll come straight out of the sky And bring the wrath of the genocide Like the second coming of christ Does it make it right? Philosophical/ My body's built like it's unstoppable But they don't know the interior Judging like I'm the superior, but it may seems unprobable I'm a man of most, inhabitable with a spiritual host Anger get's to most when they're trying to spit baseless boast But in reality, wishing I would turn them into ghost And they be looking at themselves get stomped Laying in either a ditch, or in a trash dumpster Leaving their body in a bloody slope Punks running scared like "This *igga is flucked up on dope!" Realizing that it is NOT fun staring at the end of a gun barrel While I pull the cookie cutter, looking through the sniper scope Colors would be like the collidascope/ The last thing you'll hear Will not be red, white, or blue Or hut one, or two But me standing over YOU saying "Mothaflucka FLUCK YOU!!" Now I'm piss....... (But really I'm not!! )

01-03-2008, 05:20 PM	#11
Comix Obsession Missing In In-Action Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Southend, UK Posts: 1,847	THIS is how it's done bad boys...

01-03-2008, 05:42 PM	#12
Fred Duran Master Lurker Join Date: Apr 2004 Location: Manhattan Posts: 760	That was hysterical! "I'm the Hiphopopotamus, my rhymes are bottomless . . ." and he stops rhyming priceless!

01-04-2008, 03:17 PM	#13
Comix Obsession Missing In In-Action Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Southend, UK Posts: 1,847	That's from 'Flight of The Conchords' - utter genius - if you get a chance, just buy it, every episode is that good! Check them out on Youtube, you'll find clips from their shows and clips of them live. Seriously amazing comedy duo.

01-04-2008, 03:50 PM	#14
Shin_Jinlaw Video Game crack fiend!! Join Date: Aug 2002 Location: The Video Game Crack House. Soon will cease all outside contact when MGS4 comes out. Posts: 387	You want freestyles? Taking a break for a minute from freestyling. These are my home boys. I'm nowhere near their level. But check it out (especially you Cupil) Freestyle

01-05-2008, 12:04 PM	#15
Comix Obsession Missing In In-Action Join Date: Mar 2004 Location: Southend, UK Posts: 1,847	Check out Jermaine's (aka the 'Hiphopapotamus') freestyle during this live version of their track, 'Hiphopopotamus vs. Rhymenoceros'! I'm at that level, roughly...