occultist comic pages

mannie abeleda · 06-08-2012, 05:43 AM

here's a new book from the creators of "no Gods" . written by
Dustin carson, my art

page 2-page 3

page 4-page 5

page 6

page 9

page 10
www.mannieboy.deviantart.com
www.mannieboy.cghub.com

OZ! · 06-09-2012, 12:45 AM

Not bad. I think more figure studies would help. You seem to be over rendering as a way to compensate for lack of facial structure and anatomical understanding. Your backgrounds are very nice and your understanding of perspective is pretty good so strengthen your anatomy and structure bases and you will have the skills to do great things.

mannie abeleda · 06-15-2012, 05:23 AM

thanks OZ

Scribbly · 06-15-2012, 11:05 AM

Your inking is amazing.
Well made backgrounds. Good storytelling.
The only turn off are your figures and anatomy.
But even with that, your pages are very impressive.

mannie abeleda · 07-04-2012, 10:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Scribbly

Your inking is amazing.
Well made backgrounds. Good storytelling.
The only turn off are your figures and anatomy.
But even with that, your pages are very impressive.

thanks scribbly, Its digital inks by the way. I'll work on my figures and anatomy.thanks again for the tips.

HBrazer · 06-28-2012, 06:16 PM

Your backgrounds are AMA-ZING!

good stuff!

striker · 06-30-2012, 02:47 PM

Good i like the details textures and shadows.

Inkspot · 06-30-2012, 08:27 PM

I would say that your trust in the colorist is lacking, due to the somewhat excessive shadowing of peoples' faces. Some of that may be an issue with the pencils, like the exaggerated necks, I don't know.

Everything else seems crisp, except for the fur, feathers, and scales. Even then, there's nothing wrong, but it is a tad bit obvious that they weren't as much a concern as the other textures or faces.

At any rate, I'd hire you.

mannie abeleda · 07-04-2012, 10:46 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Inkspot

I would say that your trust in the colorist is lacking, due to the somewhat excessive shadowing of peoples' faces. Some of that may be an issue with the pencils, like the exaggerated necks, I don't know.

Everything else seems crisp, except for the fur, feathers, and scales. Even then, there's nothing wrong, but it is a tad bit obvious that they weren't as much a concern as the other textures or faces.

At any rate, I'd hire you.

thanks inkspot. I been working on indy comics for years, mostly comics in black and white. so I guess thats where the over rending came from. but thanks for the tips,I'll tone down after I finished the whole issue

thanks for the I'd hire you quote, love to work with you in the future.

thanks senji,striker,and HBrazer for the cool comments

creativesynergy · 07-16-2012, 01:14 AM

Mannie, I want to use these for the ComixTribe piece I'll be doing on your work in BREAKING THE COMIC'S PAGE. That said, I'd like the script to work from so I can get an accurate assessment. PM me and I'll give you my e-mail address.

mannie abeleda · 07-16-2012, 01:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by creativesynergy

Mannie, I want to use these for the ComixTribe piece I'll be doing on your work in BREAKING THE COMIC'S PAGE. That said, I'd like the script to work from so I can get an accurate assessment. PM me and I'll give you my e-mail address.

ok, sent you a pm,steve

Senji · 07-01-2012, 01:21 PM

Holy detail batman, great work on these pages. They reek of professionalism. Keep it up man.

06-08-2012, 05:43 AM	#1
mannie abeleda Registered User Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 76	occultist comic pages here's a new book from the creators of "no Gods" . written by Dustin carson, my art page 2-page 3 page 4-page 5 page 6 page 9 page 10 www.mannieboy.deviantart.com www.mannieboy.cghub.com

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06-09-2012, 12:45 AM	#2
OZ! All Powerful Wizard Join Date: Jul 2002 Location: Texas Posts: 4,501	Not bad. I think more figure studies would help. You seem to be over rendering as a way to compensate for lack of facial structure and anatomical understanding. Your backgrounds are very nice and your understanding of perspective is pretty good so strengthen your anatomy and structure bases and you will have the skills to do great things.

06-15-2012, 05:23 AM	#3
mannie abeleda Registered User Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 76	thanks OZ

06-15-2012, 11:05 AM	#4
Scribbly Easy Reader Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Amerika Posts: 3,741	Your inking is amazing. Well made backgrounds. Good storytelling. The only turn off are your figures and anatomy. But even with that, your pages are very impressive.

06-28-2012, 06:16 PM	#6
HBrazer Registered User Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 68	Your backgrounds are AMA-ZING! good stuff!

06-30-2012, 02:47 PM	#7
striker Registered User Join Date: Apr 2012 Location: peru Posts: 18	Good i like the details textures and shadows.

06-30-2012, 08:27 PM	#8
Inkspot Registered User Join Date: Jun 2012 Posts: 8	I would say that your trust in the colorist is lacking, due to the somewhat excessive shadowing of peoples' faces. Some of that may be an issue with the pencils, like the exaggerated necks, I don't know. Everything else seems crisp, except for the fur, feathers, and scales. Even then, there's nothing wrong, but it is a tad bit obvious that they weren't as much a concern as the other textures or faces. At any rate, I'd hire you.

07-16-2012, 01:14 AM	#10
creativesynergy Steve Colle, Editor Join Date: Mar 2003 Location: Calgary, Alberta, Canada Posts: 1,300	Mannie, I want to use these for the ComixTribe piece I'll be doing on your work in BREAKING THE COMIC'S PAGE. That said, I'd like the script to work from so I can get an accurate assessment. PM me and I'll give you my e-mail address.

07-01-2012, 01:21 PM	#12
Senji Registered User Join Date: Jun 2012 Location: London~ Posts: 29	Holy detail batman, great work on these pages. They reek of professionalism. Keep it up man.