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Join Date: Sep 2009
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Mock-Up Cover for Creator Owned Project
Hi all,
Just did a mock up cover for my own story (I uploaded a new sequential page here: http://www.digitalwebbing.com/forums...d.php?t=160262). Done with pitt pens and greyscale pro markers. No prizes for guessing the setting of the story or who I would love to publish it under. ![]() Enjoy: ![]() Thanks Sebastian http://sebastian-chow.deviantart.com/ http://sebastianchow.blogspot.co.uk/ Last edited by Echaelon; 04-23-2012 at 08:29 AM. Reason: **Image Updated with Correct Spelling** |
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Artist
Join Date: Feb 2012
Location: The Village
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Just curious, but the word "Military" appears to be misspelled. If it's on purpose, then I wonder why none of the rest of the text is misspelled? Or at least, not so that I noticed.
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I fling POO!!!
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Secret laboratory in the midle of town right next to the StarBucks.
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Cool!
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Join Date: Sep 2009
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Doh!!!
How did I miss that? Thanks for pointing that out. Now that you've mentioned it the word is stepping off the page and slapping in the face as painstakingly obvious! Somehow need to fix that. But good to know from this mockup stage! Thanks http://sebastian-chow.deviantart.com/ http://sebastianchow.blogspot.co.uk/ |
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Join Date: Sep 2009
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Picture update with the correct spelling.
I don't feel as stupid now ![]() http://sebastian-chow.deviantart.com/ http://sebastianchow.blogspot.co.uk/ |
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An agent of chaos
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Trondheim, Norway
Posts: 1,126
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Although I'm a big fan of comic covers that step outside of the box, I'm not sure if this has enough information for its audience. All it says is it's a story about Area 51, so it'll be military, conspiracy and UFO-hunters, but there are no hints on this cover as to what the original nugget in your story is. What makes this different than all other "Area 51"-stories? Could you incoporate that element into the cover somehow?
:M: www.magnus-aspli.com |
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Join Date: Sep 2009
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Thanks Magnus,
I think your right. Definitely given me something to think about. BTW, great work on Vessel of Terror ![]() In fact I was just looking a Vessel of Terror and can see how the cover provides more than just an image. http://sebastian-chow.deviantart.com/ http://sebastianchow.blogspot.co.uk/ |
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Join Date: Sep 2009
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Updated! Final Cover finished!
Ok, I tried to add something in my final version of the pages.
This is the final cover to a preview book I will showcasing at the Kapow convention in London. I'm weak at lettering but this was the best I could do at the moment. Let me know what you think! ![]() http://sebastian-chow.deviantart.com/ http://sebastianchow.blogspot.co.uk/ |
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An agent of chaos
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Trondheim, Norway
Posts: 1,126
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Nice meeting you at Kapow! Like I mentioned, I think you've got much more going with the cover now. Hard to comment on such a cover without knowing the story, but a suggestion might be to put something in the background, behind the sign, as well. If you don't feel the masks get across that extra vibe you need, that is. The logo isn't up to par, but you can find several folks here on DW who could help you with that. :M: www.magnus-aspli.com |
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Join Date: Sep 2009
Posts: 94
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Hey Magnus,
It was good to meet you too. Thanks for the feedback. I agree the logo isn't great and was partly rushed to get something complete to show around Kapow. http://sebastian-chow.deviantart.com/ http://sebastianchow.blogspot.co.uk/ |
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