Recent Pages

[Larime Taylor]

I recently went back and re-did my Hollow pages, having much more practice and experience under my belt. I thought I'd share and see what others think.

http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h128/Gimpicus/16Done.jpg
http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h128/Gimpicus/18Done.jpg
http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h128/Gimpicus/19Done.jpg
http://i63.photobucket.com/albums/h128/Gimpicus/22Done.jpg

[Roel_Torres]

Much better! This is a lot cleaner, more legible, and easier to read. Before, the handwritten fonts were very distracting and detracted from the overall reading experience. The flow is much better like this.

FYI -- it might be easier for people to comment if they could see the previous sample for reference...

Good work. Nice improvements.

[Larime Taylor]

Thanks!

The main dialogue font is still my own handmade font, but Stan's font wasn't working, so I ditched it for Manga Temple.

I'm not sure where the old versions went...

[Static]

I'm really digging your balloons and font nice job.