Hot Chick + Hard Rock

[DJ Illuminist]

The first one's a little old, but I like it. no critiques necessary. The 2nd one I posted before but got no feed back, so I'm doin it again. His name's Hard Rock. Tell me what you think.

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m62/dj_illuminist/Drawings%20and%20Art/img013.jpg

http://i101.photobucket.com/albums/m62/dj_illuminist/Drawings%20and%20Art/img014.jpg

Thanks for lookin.

~P

[DJ Illuminist]

Nothing??? ... That disappoints me.

[Caio Reis]

Hey, man. I think that's an interesting character, he has a nice guitarr (or is that a banjo).
You could improve your anatomy. The shading you tried to do isn't working either: his clothes seem artificial, they don't resemble anything real. Try to study how real clothes fold and how they're affected by the person inside of it.

Keep it up, you can do better.

[DJ Illuminist]

thx for the critique.

[Artsta]

i like the top one. but yeah basically dude just keep practicing your anatomy.