inks over claton henry

[silverspider]

http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c145/silverspider01/pencilsandinks3.jpg
http://i26.photobucket.com/albums/c145/silverspider01/pencilsandinks2.jpg

[Thorcus]

IMO you stay very close with his lines - i dunno how he likes to see his lines inked, but i would prefer some more linevariotions. But all pages looks goo.

[egets]

I somehow thought like Thorcus too (while Im no pro mind me) that even the pencils are very simple you could have added something to make the inks look more "alive" or something, it looks too clean and ummm static or something (lukewarm?) But I know its been a heck of work to make them look this neat so credit for your hardwork !!!!!!!!

[Mecha]

Very clean lines but you stick to the pencilled lines too much :) Keep practicing feathering and hatching as well, try different kinds of strokes and such to get them sharp and clean.

[Boy]

Pretty good, but I'd agree with all of the crits so far. You're sticking a bit too close to the pencils and your feathering/hatching does need work.

But work at it and you're gonna be doing great work soon!