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Gwlister
08-17-2006, 08:25 AM
Hey gang --

Here's a panel from my new webcomic, "Morganna of the Borgs". I do the entire thing - writing, pencils, inks and lettering. I'm not the most confident of inkers so I wanted to get everyone's critiques and comments on the inkwork.

Go to www.listerart.com and click on the COMIX link in the navigation bar if you'd like to see the rest.

Thanks!

http://listerart.com/slideshow/gallery/album1/large/mb_page9.jpg

mikeexner3
08-19-2006, 11:13 PM
The art is amazing, Gary. I'm not a really good critic when it comes to inks, but the entire package looks really impressive here. I think the heavy blacks really make the characters (especially the cat/victims on the right) pop. There is a typo in the lettering, though. Shame, shame. :D

Gwlister
08-20-2006, 12:15 PM
GAH! I've read that panel over and over again and I didn't catch the typo! I'm fixing it right NOW. I think I've shown it to others and nobody has said anything -- thanks for bringing to my attention otherwise it would probably hang out there on the web like that forever.

Care to proof read the rest of my site? :p :p

Gwlister
08-20-2006, 12:45 PM
Typo fixed! whew! :)

ChromeSamurai
09-03-2006, 07:16 AM
Man, that's high production for a webcomic. Great to see someone put that much into it. Your line weights rock and I agree, the blacks give it this feel like one of the old Heavy Metal comics from back in the day or something. That's a good thing.

BW Fan
09-05-2006, 10:34 PM
That's some good work, as always. Really liking the grayscale, too!

comixnut
09-07-2006, 08:14 AM
the comic looks totally awesome man! when i have a chance of reading it all ill let you know what i think of the story! :)