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greenlantern2099
08-05-2006, 12:06 AM
Mary Jane by Terry Brooks
Inker: ME
Xman, spy boy, by Steven Sanchez
INker: Me

Batman Artist : Unknown
Inker by ME

I did these pin-ups on thursday, its my first time using a brush. Please let me know where I can improve, because I don't know if they are any good.

http://files.tagworld.com/5a1c843fe2be1d0849abbb12a9f716dfd2cf.jpeg
greenlantern2099
08-05-2006, 12:11 AM
http://files.tagworld.com/1b8700799d2bf43846d8a0c463118e44c9e3.jpeg
greenlantern2099
08-05-2006, 12:30 AM
http://files.tagworld.com/5a1c843fe2be1d0849abbb12a9f716dfd2cf.jpeg
greenlantern2099
08-05-2006, 12:32 AM
http://files.tagworld.com/3bb64876f8a351624be7bd464f2fb15c0d80.gif
greenlantern2099
08-05-2006, 12:32 AM
http://files.tagworld.com/4141a3f0f8e543744ec484e7caac10f4bfa6.jpeg
M@u::
08-05-2006, 06:10 AM
like your style, nice inks
greenlantern2099
08-06-2006, 04:37 AM
thank you very much, but I still think I need some pointers. Does anyone have any for me?
WickedWiggins
08-06-2006, 12:29 PM
Slow down, and take your time. It looks as though you rushed it. Practice, Practice, Practice! You already possess the skill now just hone it. Good luck, and have fun with it.

Mary Jane and Batman are my favs! Nicely done.
down21
08-07-2006, 12:40 AM
Really great!!
but if you insist...
1. You're blacks aren't black enough for me in the bike one. Do you plan on going over the big black areas again? Do you use FW ink cuz some of the other stuff can really wash out.
2. I really like mary jane but your line isn't consistant for example there's a dark thick pattern on the top of her right (my left) sleeve that drops off for some reason? and I like the thicker outside lines and thinner inside lines but again somewhat inconsistant?

3. With the stormtrooper type of thing. the blacks kind of don't follow through. In the leg it could be emphasized.

Anyway, those are just points if I'm pressed otherwise I think your inking is BRILLIANT! Batman is perfect! I'd hire ya.
Good luck!
greenlantern2099
08-07-2006, 03:00 AM
Thank you so much guys. I used pen brushes for Xman and for Spy Boy but had a problem controling the line work. Mary Jane and Batman I used your standard brushes you buy in a pack.
I will take the 3 inked images and darken them up in photoshop then at last color them. Wish me luck