Beau'wolf

[Staplebug]

Cheery Swords n Sorcery nonsense. I'll paste it up a page or so at a time. C&C very welcome.

http://www.rhaidley.com/comics/beau01_web.jpg

[Poboy]

Drawing-wise, I like the facial expressions, and the blacks are well done. nice level of detail. I'm not a big fan of profile shots, they just seem stiff and weird.
Story-wise, I'd definitely turn the page, but I would've preferred leaving the modern slang out (ie, 'old school'). And it's 'lair' by the way.



Nice work overall.

[Staplebug]

Thx, Poboy. You're right, I do need to work on my profiles ...
I'll leave the language in for now, because it's not the most reverent take on beowulf. But I'll think about an alternative for "Old School".

Page 2 ~
http://www.rhaidley.com/comics/beau02_web.jpg

[Staplebug]

Pages 3 & 4 ...
( page 3 slightly edited, to make the nudity less explicit than it is in the ink version )
http://www.rhaidley.com/comics/beau03_web_modesty.jpg

http://www.rhaidley.com/comics/beau04_web.jpg

[AthenaRose]

Very nice!

[RudyVasquez]

I really enjoyed reading this dude!