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[ariel]

http://www.imageigloo.com/images/3485page1.jpg


I kind of did another page similar to the last "random page" post. Trying to get that battle started.

Fixed the link

[sevans]

Your work is so stylised and over the top, I feel like I should hate it, But i really like it.

This isn't the usual sort of art that appeals to me, but I like the fact that your 'pushing' the character designs to the extreme. To Me it looks like a cross between anime art and Simon Bisley.

Keep postin!

[BlackStripes_EX0]

This is WONDERFUL!!

I love it. No complaints what-so-ever. Keep crankin' out the outstanding work!!

[ariel]

Thanks guys.

Sevens -- what style is your niche.

[jmassie]

This is very slick and clean looking work. Though, I think the layout of the page needs work. I have no Idea what panel to go to 2nd..or 3rd....or 4th....or...HOLY SH--! It's like a random collection of Images/moments whatever. I'm confused. Storytelling is what you should be concerned with. Being clear and concise should be your focus. You have interesting visuals but that's not all there is to it.

[ariel]

hmm ,mabey your right but I didnt care much about that in this page since its just him walking twords them.

[jmassie]

hmm ,mabey your right but I didnt care much about that in this page since its just him walking twords them.

What???!!! The whole point of making comics is telling a story. Telling that story in a way that's clear and visually interesting. You need to care. Even if you're just showing somebody eating cereal..make sure the panels of that person eating cereal aren't confusing. If you Don't care much about your layouts and you've got random panels all over the place people will look away. They won't read it. I assume you want people to read your stuff right.

[ariel]

Ill try snd watch out next time

[hellblazer72]

random panels hmmm...sounds like a liefeld comic to me... :eek:

[ariel]

Well there not supposed to be random !
haha
Is it that unclear?

[Jon Covington]

Excellent artwork. One thing: The way the last two panels are arranged, it throws off the path of the reader's eye while scanning the page. I know that the top panel is the first, followed by the two inset closeups on the armed characters, but I am confused as to which panel to go to next: the bottom panel or the right inset panel?

When arranging panels and drawing the content within them, you need to keep in mind the path of the reader's eye, and where you want to lead it. Too much confusion can throw off a reader, and quite possibly, turn them off to the comic.

[ariel]

The right panel is supposed to be first..

[hellblazer72]

the story's not unclear until the last 2 panels...other than that very interesting style....