j giar
07-19-2006, 02:21 PM
Took a weeks vacation and came back a writing fool. Or maybe just a fool. This is the first three pages of book 2. Unlike book 1, which I just went in wrote and backtracked, segmenting the story into pages and panels. I'm trying this a little more controlled, even though I'm doing the artwork.
Sorry, forgot to mention. There is foul language. So if you'll be offended...don't read it.
SOULDRIVER Book 2
PAGE 1
This is an opening segment. Page one and two are all panoramic panels. Each page is made up of 6 panels.
PANEL 1: Close up of a hand and finger as it holds a bullet.
Caption/ Voice over: “So how many you got left?”
PANEL 2: Close up of a two clips in the palm of a left hand.
Caption1:“I got two full ones left..that’s it.”
Caption2: “Fuck!”
Caption1:”What about you?”
PANEL 3: Fingers sliding a shell into the cylinder of a 357mag.snub nose.
Caption: “I got seven shells brutha…seven.”
Caption: “Well that definitely is not enough. There’s a whole lot fuckin more of them than that.”
PANEL 4: Fingers continue loading into the cylinder.
Caption: “Any ideas?”
Caption: “Nope! Pretty much figured on beating them to death with my guns when I run out of bullets.”
PANEL 5: A hand holds an automatic in the left hand, slapping a clip into the handle. We a slight angle to the right hand.
Caption: “Heh, well at least that’s somethin of a plan.”
Caption:”Yeah..yeah!”
PANEL 6: The hand holds the gun up pulling the slide back.
Caption:” How long for you think they’ll charge us?”
SFX: SCHACK! (Slide being pulled back.)
Caption: “I don’t know 15 minutes…maybe half hour. We took out a shit load of’em.
It’ll take’m a while to regenerate.”
PAGE 2
(Again, comprised of 6 panoramic panels.)
PANEL1: We continue to watch the hand feed shells into the, now half full, chamber.
Caption: “Think she’ll make it in time?”
Caption: “Was kind of hoping she’d be here by now.”
PANEL2: Loading
Caption: “Just really no good time for a gunfight..Is there?
Caption: “Hehh hhuh. No!..No there’s not.”
PANEL3: We see a lap with one of the loaded automatics lying across it. In the right hand another automatic as the clip is slapped into place. The right hand is bandaged around the palm with a make shift tourniquet. We can see blood stains on the knuckle side of the hand.
Caption: “Did you hear that? Listen.”
Caption: “What.”
Caption: “SShh..listen.”
PANEL4: Silent panel.
PANEL5: Close up of the other automatic as the slide is pulled back.
Caption: “I don’t hear anything. Why don’t you stick that big melon head of yours out there and take a peek.”
SFX: SCHACK!
Caption: “Fuck you! I’d rather piss glass. You fuckin check bitch.”
PANEL6: The right hand holding the automatic begins to trickle blood down to the fingers.
Caption1: Laughter
Caption2: Laughter..ahhwwow.!
PAGE 3:
This is a full page shot of both Frank Voiturier and Andre Markus. They are both sitting on the floor their backs against the wall, heads resting back. Their knees are bent, hands draped over them. A large wooden door separates them, Frank on the right and Andre on the left. In each hand Frank holds 45 automatics. Blood is trailing down the right hand and covering his fingers. Andre holds the snub nosed magnum in his right hand. Both Andre and Frank are dressed in black suits and ties with white collared shirts. Blood splatters can be seen on the stark white shirts. Both look exhausted and are both heavily wounded and bleeding.
The walls are old plaster and wood lathe. Some of the plaster is missing, exposing the slats of wood beneath. Bullet holes can be seen all over the walls and thru the door. Both Andre and Frank are in black suits and ties with white collared shirts. Spent bullet casings are littered all over the floor, as well as empty weapons. Automatic rifles, shotgun, handguns are strew about with broken glass and trash.
Caption/ Andre: “You alright?”
Sorry, forgot to mention. There is foul language. So if you'll be offended...don't read it.
SOULDRIVER Book 2
PAGE 1
This is an opening segment. Page one and two are all panoramic panels. Each page is made up of 6 panels.
PANEL 1: Close up of a hand and finger as it holds a bullet.
Caption/ Voice over: “So how many you got left?”
PANEL 2: Close up of a two clips in the palm of a left hand.
Caption1:“I got two full ones left..that’s it.”
Caption2: “Fuck!”
Caption1:”What about you?”
PANEL 3: Fingers sliding a shell into the cylinder of a 357mag.snub nose.
Caption: “I got seven shells brutha…seven.”
Caption: “Well that definitely is not enough. There’s a whole lot fuckin more of them than that.”
PANEL 4: Fingers continue loading into the cylinder.
Caption: “Any ideas?”
Caption: “Nope! Pretty much figured on beating them to death with my guns when I run out of bullets.”
PANEL 5: A hand holds an automatic in the left hand, slapping a clip into the handle. We a slight angle to the right hand.
Caption: “Heh, well at least that’s somethin of a plan.”
Caption:”Yeah..yeah!”
PANEL 6: The hand holds the gun up pulling the slide back.
Caption:” How long for you think they’ll charge us?”
SFX: SCHACK! (Slide being pulled back.)
Caption: “I don’t know 15 minutes…maybe half hour. We took out a shit load of’em.
It’ll take’m a while to regenerate.”
PAGE 2
(Again, comprised of 6 panoramic panels.)
PANEL1: We continue to watch the hand feed shells into the, now half full, chamber.
Caption: “Think she’ll make it in time?”
Caption: “Was kind of hoping she’d be here by now.”
PANEL2: Loading
Caption: “Just really no good time for a gunfight..Is there?
Caption: “Hehh hhuh. No!..No there’s not.”
PANEL3: We see a lap with one of the loaded automatics lying across it. In the right hand another automatic as the clip is slapped into place. The right hand is bandaged around the palm with a make shift tourniquet. We can see blood stains on the knuckle side of the hand.
Caption: “Did you hear that? Listen.”
Caption: “What.”
Caption: “SShh..listen.”
PANEL4: Silent panel.
PANEL5: Close up of the other automatic as the slide is pulled back.
Caption: “I don’t hear anything. Why don’t you stick that big melon head of yours out there and take a peek.”
SFX: SCHACK!
Caption: “Fuck you! I’d rather piss glass. You fuckin check bitch.”
PANEL6: The right hand holding the automatic begins to trickle blood down to the fingers.
Caption1: Laughter
Caption2: Laughter..ahhwwow.!
PAGE 3:
This is a full page shot of both Frank Voiturier and Andre Markus. They are both sitting on the floor their backs against the wall, heads resting back. Their knees are bent, hands draped over them. A large wooden door separates them, Frank on the right and Andre on the left. In each hand Frank holds 45 automatics. Blood is trailing down the right hand and covering his fingers. Andre holds the snub nosed magnum in his right hand. Both Andre and Frank are dressed in black suits and ties with white collared shirts. Blood splatters can be seen on the stark white shirts. Both look exhausted and are both heavily wounded and bleeding.
The walls are old plaster and wood lathe. Some of the plaster is missing, exposing the slats of wood beneath. Bullet holes can be seen all over the walls and thru the door. Both Andre and Frank are in black suits and ties with white collared shirts. Spent bullet casings are littered all over the floor, as well as empty weapons. Automatic rifles, shotgun, handguns are strew about with broken glass and trash.
Caption/ Andre: “You alright?”