UNION JACK.... JACK is BACK..

[kong]

UNION JACK.... JACK is BACK..
taken from a script by Ben Raab and John Cassady...

[kong]

with the words

http://kong.5u.com/sequentials/uj1.gif
http://kong.5u.com/sequentials/UJ2.gif
http://kong.5u.com/sequentials/uj3.gif

[sevans]

I like most of the panels except for the last one on the first page. I know that he's standing by a building ledge or similar BUT it looks like you've just cut his knees off! It just doesn't look pleasing to the eye.

Otherwise very solid and I love the large last panel. Cool pose and good 'camera' angle.

[Rotin]

Spelling mistake in the first panel... :man: :)

[Staplebug]

Love the artwork, it's chunky and clear ...

But you've got to have words with your script writers ! How exactly does Union Jack fight for "Queen and Country" in WW1 ? King George V was still on the throne. Basic History !

And "Joey" ... that's an American, not a British name.

[AthenaRose]

You can have British Joey's...

Anyway love the costume design-change - shows real time difference.

R

[payon23]

Looking good Kong!

Great artwork and I love what you do with your camera angles.

-P-

[GRIMSCRIBE]

Way to go, Staplebug. I am so tired of lazy writers not doing an ounce of research. This artwork is fantastic, but sloppy writing isn't going to help it.
Ron

[MrGranger]

Great stuff!

[kong]

I like most of the panels except for the last one on the first page. I know that he's standing by a building ledge or similar BUT it looks like you've just cut his knees off! It just doesn't look pleasing to the eye.

Otherwise very solid and I love the large last panel. Cool pose and good 'camera' angle.

Thanks man.. yea i saw what your saying on the 1st page.. when I was in the rough drawing of the page.. but I tried to make it work... It actually looked worse..

[RedDragonUK]

I like it good work :kewl:

[kong]

Rotin - and the mistake is...

Staplebug- thanks.. thier not my script writers but they were Marvels.

AthenaRose- thanks man.. Union Jack is a badazz!

payon23- thank you .. I keep trying to do better.

GRIMSCRIBE - Fantastic.. your too kind. :p

MrGranger - muchos gracious....

RedDragonUK- thanks.. one day i'm gonna visit London! :har:

[Rotin]

Two I`s in union. your welcome..... ;)

[kong]

Two I`s in union. your welcome..... ;)
just testing ya buddy :)
yes i am an idiot...;0

[Rotin]

hahahahaha....I forgot to mention i liked this a whole bunch too.....

[kong]

hahahahaha....I forgot to mention i liked this a whole bunch too.....
gracious Rotin.. gracious..

[SethNI]

I like it! Always loved Union Jack, was glad to hear a new series was coming out.
Love the last page. Great angles.

[Eric Palicki]

Two I`s in union. your welcome..... ;)

You meant 'you're,' not 'your,' right? Oh, the irony...

[Rotin]

Now that`s funny!! :laugh: :laugh: