My second page - feedback requested

[eltonpruitt]

I swear I won't post every single page asking for your guys feedback, but since this is only the second page I've ever done, I'd appreciate any input you guys have on how this is looking.

thanks,
Elton

http://intelligentzombie.com/images/1-letters.jpg

[Jason Arthur]

It's a bit small for me to read everything, but in terms of layout it seems fine to me. You could move a balloon or two around a bit, but it works nicely as is.

Nice work,

-- J

[eltonpruitt]

thanks Jason!

Your Illustrator template has been extremely helpful in this process, I've gotta say!

I think for my own purposes, I want to sometime try adding a bunch of pointers to it, like you have the different balloons. So far I find the pointers the trickiest part of the process and often have to redo them a few times before they look like I want.