View Full Version : Pages for San Diego
06-12-2006, 01:49 AM
Here are some pages for the RONIN FOR HIRE ashcan. Let me know what you think!
I guess I'll have to link:
06-12-2006, 04:47 AM
all the pic have a "REMOTE LINKING OF PAGES NOT ALLOWED" message, use another image service or post the links.
06-12-2006, 05:15 AM
I had to "right click, save as" to see them, but I'm glad I did. These are some pretty decent pages. Pretty good use of different angles and perspective. You might want to pull back or zoom in some more, all these shots look about the same distance from the reader. They are pretty dynamic, but could be a little more so with just a little tweak here and there. You definitely have some talent and seem to know pretty well what you're doing. With a bit more practice you'll totally be there. Kudos!
06-12-2006, 05:19 PM
Your anatomy is not the strongest (the last panel of the third page is the worst - his neck/head) , but your storytelling is very clear, you set the scene very well, there is some good foreshortening and overall the work just appeals to me.
Very nice and keep posting. Love the opening cityscape panel, but did you use a ruler?
Work on the anatomy abit more to stop your characters looking (slightly) like mannequins and your work will be very solid.
06-12-2006, 08:35 PM
First, Thanks to everybody who checked out my pages!
Erick Cruz: Yeah, I'm getting off AOL and having trouble finding a place to host my website/images! Any suggestions?
carriertone: I got 4 panels that look alot alike, I better change that. When your looking at 11 x 17 little differences look bigger.
sevans: Wow that first panel is pretty jacked up. I'm gonna change/fix that, its too similar to the shot on the next page. BTW, I drew a grid & freehanded it in the grid. Better work on that.
Thanks to everybody who commented, I'll post mosre as I finish them (and find a host!)
06-14-2006, 10:41 PM
Okay, hopefully these will show up! Somebody let me know.
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