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05-31-2006, 05:28 PM
Hi all, my doubt is which shot I should choose for the last 3 panels of this page. They will be much like the same, just some variations on the character poses but it has to be the same shot. The thig is that in option A I'm breaking the 180 rule but you can see them in more detail and option B sounds more like a correct one.The fisrt one should be as it is. Any thoughts on this?
Thanks a lot.
BTW, of course this are rushed sketches....
Option A if I had to choose between the 2.
I'd actually use a different angle. Looking at the front of the characters as in Option A, but from the left, not the right. That way the characters continue to face in the same direction throughtout the page, i.e. to the right.
06-03-2006, 10:46 PM
Option A for 2 reasons:
1) you have the advantage of seeing facial expressions
2) you de-emphasize the female character's butt in 3 repeating panels.
06-05-2006, 03:31 PM
Option A, but I would change panel 1 entirely to have all front views of your characters on that page. I don't think it's very dynamic to have them with their backs at the reader, despite what they are doing.
06-05-2006, 04:02 PM
Option A. . . Why? Simple. . . More variety. . . ( and like the other fellas have pointed out. . . facial expressions )
A pity though. . . hate to waste such splendid azz shots.( always an eye-catcher )
But why not compromise. . . :bounce:
Can't you just throw in a panel from Option B?
06-15-2006, 08:57 PM
Thanks for your time, guys. After discussing about this with the writter we decided to go for the B option. There are some variations not shown there in the last 3 panels, like the girl leaving and walking towards us in panel 3 and the guy slightly bent over the sink. As soon as I can I'll post this page.
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