Punchline help needed!

[Amtekoth]

Alright folks,

I've run into a mental roadblock on the newest episode: Lab Bratz #64 (http://labbratz.comicgenesis.com)

It's a set-up episode for Dodd's search in the data archives. But it has no punchline, and I'm unhappy about it.

The dialogue can be changed, the art cannot.

If you'd like to help, fire away!

Thanks,

Ed

[JamieRoberts]

Second speech balloon could read

"Ze light! It burnssss!"

if you want there to be a strange creature living in there. If you don't, I'm all outta ideas. Too early!

[Imboden]

"Precioussssss?"

[JamieRoberts]

You know what? That's the very first thing I thought!

[Amtekoth]

My wife laughed out loud when I read her "Precious"! It doesn't fit the (unseen) character who is in the Vault (surprise for next week), but it is funny.

"Do not arouse the wrath of the great and powerful Oz!" was one thought.

"Turn off that light!"

"Shhh. Hide. It comes."

I know, lame...

[Buckyrig]

Not a line, but the shot reminds me of The Lady or the Tiger.

[mistermaxx]

Panel 4, Balloon 2:

"Hello, Clarice..."

[Amtekoth]

Panel 4, Balloon 2:

"Hello, Clarice..."

Very dark...I like it...

[kshah777]

Or you could just go with the real psycho from that movie.

"It puts the lotion in the basket..."

[JamieRoberts]

Howsabout: "Su-su-sudio!"

[Fred Duran]

"I'M NOT DECENT!!"
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