hoodsdavidscott
05-29-2006, 11:11 PM
PAGE 11
PANEL 1: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – MORNING
One relaxed Jude hangs an arm on his window side, driving.
JUDE: You might want to tell me if someone’s looking for you… just in case I get in trouble.
PANEL 2
Lauren plows through the burger.
LAUREN: You don’t have a damn thing to worry about. Just drive.
PANEL 3
Jude and Lauren regard each other. His mirror shades and her narrowed, sharp and penetrating glare.
JUDE: One of thoses. Shall I shut up and drive?
PANEL 4
Lauren turns her head toward the window.
LAUREN: Something like that, yeah.
PANELS 5 – 7: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR / EXT. FREEWAY – MORNING
Lauren rests her head against the window, looking out at the speeding world. Pulling back to let Jude’s car drive on against the approaching mid-day spun, arcing to follow the car from above—
PAGE 12
PANEL 1: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – MIDDAY
--that matches Jude’s POV looking through the windshield at the mountains to the east loom in the distance.
PANEL 2 – 3
Lauren’s eyes flutter watching the world pass by, looking out.
PANEL 4 – 6
From Jude’s POV, he continues driving, switching highways.
PAGE 13
PANEL 1 – 3: INT. MATHIS’ APARTMENT – NIGHT
In B&W, from Jude’s POV, Lea slams the refrigerator door open and looks inside. Slamming it, she whirls and shoves him.
LEA: Shut up!
PANEL 4
A white flash—
PANEL 5 – 7: EXT. FREEWAY / INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – DAY
--zooms from the freeway onto the driver’s side window, closing in on Jude’s features to streak past and land on Lauren, sleeping in the passenger seat.
PAGE 14
PANELS 1 - 2
From Jude’s POV, he glances at the sleeping girl, twitching in her sleep
PANEL 3
A CU on Lauren’s quivering features, fast asleep.
PANEL 4 – 6: INT. VERADER HOUSE – MORNING
From a little girl’s POV, she stands up at Hank’s beckoning finger. He stands from the chair and unbelts his pants.
PAGE 15
PANEL 1 – 3: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR - EARLY AFTERNOON
Lauren’s eyes snap open as she turns her head toward Jude. She blinks, yawns and stretches in the passenger seat.
LAUREN: How long was I out?
PANEL 4
Jude lounges in the driver’s seat, watching the road ahead.
JUDE: Don’t know. Maybe an hour and a half, two.
PANEL 5
Blinking, Lauren looks around then through the windshield ahead at:
PANEL 6: EXT. MOUNTAIN HIGHWAY PASS – AFTERNOON
The trees, foliage and overgrowth of a forest lines both sides, side-winding through the mountain pass in Lauren’s POV.
LAUREN (O.F.): Where are we going?
PAGE 16
PANEL 1: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – AFTERNOON
Jude smirks, glancing at her.
JUDE: I thought you didn’t want to chat.
LAUREN: I changed my mind. Where are we going?
JUDE: …Nevada. I cut through a pass here.
PANEL 2
Lauren swallows, takes in the state of her stained, dirt-layered clothes.
LAUREN: Look. I’m sorry about what I said earlier. It pays not to talk too much, you know?
PANEL 3
JUDE (nodding): Yeah, I understand. Didn’t mean to pry. I’m just one of those guys that likes to know.
PANEL 4 – 6: INT. MATHIS’ APARTMENT – NIGHT
From Jude’s POV in B&W, Lea shoves Jude roughly off to the side and storms past him—
PANEL 7 – 8
--into the living room. Suitcases are packed on the floor. Lea bends to pick up the suitcases as Jude’s arms reach for her, grab her arm.
PAGE 17
PANEL 1 – 2: INT. MATHIS APARTMENT – NIGHT
Lea jerks her arm away and angrily whips around on him.
LEA (yelling): Don’t you ****ing touch me! Don’t ever touch me again!
JUDE (O.F.): You’re not going anywhere!
LEA: **** off! It’s none of your god-damned business what I do anymore! It’s over, Jude! Get used to it and wherever the **** it is you go!
PANEL 3
A white flash—
PANEL 4: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – AFTERNOON
--matches the flashing smile from Jude (Lauren’s POV).
JUDE (smiling): Name’s Jude.
PANEL 5
Lauren studies him before turning her head to stare out the windshield.
LAUREN: Lauren… What’s in Nevada?
JUDE (O.F.) Family home.
PANEL 6
Jude winks at her.
JUDE: I grew up there.
PAGE 18
PANEL 1: INT. JUDE’S CAR – AFTERNOON
Both Jude and Lauren watch the mountain highway unfold. She glances out the side window.
LAUREN: What brought you to California?
JUDE: What else? Job opportunity, new experience, good weather. Why does anyone else?
LAUREN (finally smiling slightly): So what happened? Didn’t work?
PANEL 2 – 3
Jude falls silent for a moment and concentrates on the road ahead. He swallows, his face unreadable.
PANEL 4: INT. VERADER HOUSE – MORNING
From Lauren’s POV in B&W, Harnk points at the floor in front of him. A dark, murderous look.
PANEL 5 – 7
From Lauren’s POV in B&W, she backs up as Hank advances and grabs her arm, shoving her. She falls, landing on her back staring at a wood paneled ceiling.
PAGE 19
PANEL 1: INT. VERADER HOUSE – MORNING
In B&W from Lauren’s POV, Hank suddenly appears above her.
PANEL 2
One hand reaches for her mouth, the other shoves down his boxers.
PANEL 3 - 4
Lowering himself, he suddenly heaves. The girl’s arms flail.
LAUREN (O.F.) NO!
PANEL 5
A white flash—
PAGE 20
PANEL 1: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – AFTERNOON
--as Jude glances at Lauren.
JUDE: No. I do this trip every six months or so.
PANEL 2
Lauren takes in Jude’s reply, in thought.
JUDE (O.F.): Go out. Check on the condition of the house, the tenants, fix anything that needs fixing. Maintenance mostly.
PANEL 3
JUDE(glancing at her): What about you? Where are you from?
PANEL 4
Lauren’s eyes harden.
PANEL 1: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – MORNING
One relaxed Jude hangs an arm on his window side, driving.
JUDE: You might want to tell me if someone’s looking for you… just in case I get in trouble.
PANEL 2
Lauren plows through the burger.
LAUREN: You don’t have a damn thing to worry about. Just drive.
PANEL 3
Jude and Lauren regard each other. His mirror shades and her narrowed, sharp and penetrating glare.
JUDE: One of thoses. Shall I shut up and drive?
PANEL 4
Lauren turns her head toward the window.
LAUREN: Something like that, yeah.
PANELS 5 – 7: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR / EXT. FREEWAY – MORNING
Lauren rests her head against the window, looking out at the speeding world. Pulling back to let Jude’s car drive on against the approaching mid-day spun, arcing to follow the car from above—
PAGE 12
PANEL 1: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – MIDDAY
--that matches Jude’s POV looking through the windshield at the mountains to the east loom in the distance.
PANEL 2 – 3
Lauren’s eyes flutter watching the world pass by, looking out.
PANEL 4 – 6
From Jude’s POV, he continues driving, switching highways.
PAGE 13
PANEL 1 – 3: INT. MATHIS’ APARTMENT – NIGHT
In B&W, from Jude’s POV, Lea slams the refrigerator door open and looks inside. Slamming it, she whirls and shoves him.
LEA: Shut up!
PANEL 4
A white flash—
PANEL 5 – 7: EXT. FREEWAY / INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – DAY
--zooms from the freeway onto the driver’s side window, closing in on Jude’s features to streak past and land on Lauren, sleeping in the passenger seat.
PAGE 14
PANELS 1 - 2
From Jude’s POV, he glances at the sleeping girl, twitching in her sleep
PANEL 3
A CU on Lauren’s quivering features, fast asleep.
PANEL 4 – 6: INT. VERADER HOUSE – MORNING
From a little girl’s POV, she stands up at Hank’s beckoning finger. He stands from the chair and unbelts his pants.
PAGE 15
PANEL 1 – 3: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR - EARLY AFTERNOON
Lauren’s eyes snap open as she turns her head toward Jude. She blinks, yawns and stretches in the passenger seat.
LAUREN: How long was I out?
PANEL 4
Jude lounges in the driver’s seat, watching the road ahead.
JUDE: Don’t know. Maybe an hour and a half, two.
PANEL 5
Blinking, Lauren looks around then through the windshield ahead at:
PANEL 6: EXT. MOUNTAIN HIGHWAY PASS – AFTERNOON
The trees, foliage and overgrowth of a forest lines both sides, side-winding through the mountain pass in Lauren’s POV.
LAUREN (O.F.): Where are we going?
PAGE 16
PANEL 1: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – AFTERNOON
Jude smirks, glancing at her.
JUDE: I thought you didn’t want to chat.
LAUREN: I changed my mind. Where are we going?
JUDE: …Nevada. I cut through a pass here.
PANEL 2
Lauren swallows, takes in the state of her stained, dirt-layered clothes.
LAUREN: Look. I’m sorry about what I said earlier. It pays not to talk too much, you know?
PANEL 3
JUDE (nodding): Yeah, I understand. Didn’t mean to pry. I’m just one of those guys that likes to know.
PANEL 4 – 6: INT. MATHIS’ APARTMENT – NIGHT
From Jude’s POV in B&W, Lea shoves Jude roughly off to the side and storms past him—
PANEL 7 – 8
--into the living room. Suitcases are packed on the floor. Lea bends to pick up the suitcases as Jude’s arms reach for her, grab her arm.
PAGE 17
PANEL 1 – 2: INT. MATHIS APARTMENT – NIGHT
Lea jerks her arm away and angrily whips around on him.
LEA (yelling): Don’t you ****ing touch me! Don’t ever touch me again!
JUDE (O.F.): You’re not going anywhere!
LEA: **** off! It’s none of your god-damned business what I do anymore! It’s over, Jude! Get used to it and wherever the **** it is you go!
PANEL 3
A white flash—
PANEL 4: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – AFTERNOON
--matches the flashing smile from Jude (Lauren’s POV).
JUDE (smiling): Name’s Jude.
PANEL 5
Lauren studies him before turning her head to stare out the windshield.
LAUREN: Lauren… What’s in Nevada?
JUDE (O.F.) Family home.
PANEL 6
Jude winks at her.
JUDE: I grew up there.
PAGE 18
PANEL 1: INT. JUDE’S CAR – AFTERNOON
Both Jude and Lauren watch the mountain highway unfold. She glances out the side window.
LAUREN: What brought you to California?
JUDE: What else? Job opportunity, new experience, good weather. Why does anyone else?
LAUREN (finally smiling slightly): So what happened? Didn’t work?
PANEL 2 – 3
Jude falls silent for a moment and concentrates on the road ahead. He swallows, his face unreadable.
PANEL 4: INT. VERADER HOUSE – MORNING
From Lauren’s POV in B&W, Harnk points at the floor in front of him. A dark, murderous look.
PANEL 5 – 7
From Lauren’s POV in B&W, she backs up as Hank advances and grabs her arm, shoving her. She falls, landing on her back staring at a wood paneled ceiling.
PAGE 19
PANEL 1: INT. VERADER HOUSE – MORNING
In B&W from Lauren’s POV, Hank suddenly appears above her.
PANEL 2
One hand reaches for her mouth, the other shoves down his boxers.
PANEL 3 - 4
Lowering himself, he suddenly heaves. The girl’s arms flail.
LAUREN (O.F.) NO!
PANEL 5
A white flash—
PAGE 20
PANEL 1: INT. JUDE MATHIS’ CAR – AFTERNOON
--as Jude glances at Lauren.
JUDE: No. I do this trip every six months or so.
PANEL 2
Lauren takes in Jude’s reply, in thought.
JUDE (O.F.): Go out. Check on the condition of the house, the tenants, fix anything that needs fixing. Maintenance mostly.
PANEL 3
JUDE(glancing at her): What about you? Where are you from?
PANEL 4
Lauren’s eyes harden.