ReekingHavoc
05-29-2006, 02:25 PM
Here's the final part of my latest script. Thanks for reading. Let me know what you think. Issue 5 is on its way.
PAGE 13:
1. (EXT. CITY--EVENING: HIGH ANGLE: Rash screams into the sky.)
RASH: I NEED A ****ING CIGARETTE RIGHT ****ING NOW!!!
2. (Rash stomps off into a smoke shop, pissed and out of control. Dizzy tries to stop him.)
RASH: Screw this! When Rash Vasquez want something, Rash Vasquez gets it!
DIZZY: No! Wait!
3. (SAME AS PANEL 2: Dizzy waits nervously for Rash to exit the smoke shop.)
STORE OWNER (from inside store): Hey! I told you to never come in here again!
RASH (from inside store): I need a cigarette!
STORE OWNER (from inside store): CALL THE COPS!
4. (SAME AS PANEL 2: Rash and Dizzy run from the STORE OWNER, a fat, old man waving a baseball bat.)
STORE OWNER: Stay out of my store you little shit!
DIZZY: You got caught stealing from there two weeks ago, remember?
RASH: I hate this city.
PAGE 14:
1. (Rash and Dizzy round the corner and stop. Rash doubles over, gasping for breath. In front of them are Bailey and Havoc Boy, ducked behind a mailbox and spying across the street.)
RASH: Can't breathe...need...cigarette.
2. (Dizzy crouches down next to Bailey, trying to see what she sees.)
DIZZY: What is it? Cops?
BAILEY: So much worse than cops.
3. (EXT. NEWS STAND--EVENING: Across the street, a YUPPIE MAN and his YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND are at a news stand. The Yuppie Man is wearing a light tan dress jacket and black slacks. His girlfriend is an equally expensive outfit.)
BAILEY (off panel): Yuppies.
4. (BIG PANEL--CLOSE UP on Rash, looking up with a vengeance.)
RASH (with total spite): Yuppies.
PAGE 15:
1. (Rash shoves Dizzy out of the way, taking her place next to Bailey.)
DIZZY: Asshole!
RASH: What's the plan?
BAILEY: There's two of them, so we're gonna keep it simple. We wait until they get close enough. When they do, Havoc's gonna break their legs and rape the guy in front of his woman until they both cry.
2. (On Havoc Boy, disgusted.)
HAVOC BOY: No.
HAVOC BOY: I'm.
HAVOC BOY: Not.
3. (Bailey looks at Havoc Boy. Rash keeps looking forward, ready to completely **** up the yuppies across the street. Oh how he hates yuppies.)
BAILEY: Well you should.
RASH: I've got a better idea.
4. (EXT. NEWS STAND--EVENING: The yuppie couple walk away from the news stand. Yuppie Girlfriend is flipping through a magazine. Yuppie Man tucks his wallet away inside his jacket.)
5. (The couple walks down the street. Dizzy is approaching them.)
YUPPIE MAN: There. You got your magazine. Happy now?
YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND: Yes. Very.
YUPPIE MAN: Does this mean we'll be having sex tonight?
YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND: No. Probably not.
PAGE 16:
1. (When Dizzy walks past the couple, she turns and stares in horror at Yuppie Man.)
YUPPIE MAN: Guess we'd better make a stop at the porn shop then.
YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND: Didn't you hear? It burnt down.
YUPPIE MAN: Oh that is just fu--
DIZZY: Oh my god! You're on fire!
2. (Yuppie Man looks around himself, panicked. His girlfriend looks confused. Dizzy points and screams.)
YUPPIE MAN: Huh?
DIZZY: Fire! Somebody help him! He's on fire!
3. (Bailey and Rash come out of nowhere and tackle Yuppie Man to the ground. Yuppie Girlfriend looks bored, unimpressed.)
RASH: Shit man! Get on the ground!
BAILEY: Stop, drop and roll! STOP, DROP AND ROLL!!!
4. (Bailey and Rash are on top of Yuppie Man now, beating the crap out of him while he lies in the fetal position.)
RASH: Put out the flames! Hit him harder!
YUPPIE MAN: Ow! OW!
PAGE 17:
1. (Dizzy grabs Yuppie Girlfriend and shakes her violently.)
DIZZY: What're you doing?! Call the fire department you twit!
YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND: I, I, I...
2. (Bailey tears the jacket off of Yuppie Man as Rash barks orders.)
RASH: It's the jacket! Get him out of the jacket!
3. (CLOSE UP on Rash's hand lighting the jacket on fire with a Zippo lighter.)
4. (Rash holds the jacket out at arm's length, turning away as it goes up in flames.)
RASH: YAAAAH!
5. (Rash and Bailey stomp the jacket on the ground.)
BAILEY: Die fire, die!
PAGE 18:
1. (Rash holds the ruined jacket up, looking at it. Bailey stands proudly next to him.)
RASH: Looks like we saved another life today Bailey La Blue.
BAILEY: Yes...but at what cost to us?
2. (Rash, Bailey and Dizzy walk away from the yuppie couple. Rash is still holding the jacket as they leave. The Yuppie Man is in shock. His girlfriend looks tired.)
RASH: No time to worry about that now. We're needed elsewhere.
RASH: No need to thank us. I'm sure you would have done the same.
BAILEY: Yes...but at what cost?
RASH (whisper): Would you shut up?
DIZZY: See ya!
3. (Yuppie Man looks on gratefully as the group leaves. His girlfriend looks at him like he's an idiot.)
YUPPIE MAN: Those kids just saved my life.
YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND: Those kids just stole your wallet.
4. (CLOSE UP on Yuppie Man's surprised face.)
PAGE 19:
1. (EXT. ALLEY--EVENING: CLOSE UP on Chuck's paranoid face. His eyes are wide with fear and suspicion.)
CHUCK: What was that?!
2. (PULL BACK to show Pill Bug working underneath the hood of the Jeep. Chuck is right next to him, looking around nervously.)
PILL BUG: You know, one of the effects of habitual marijuana use is increased paranoia.
CHUCK: I ain't shittin' you man. I heard something.
3. (Pill Bug pulls a metal box out from the hood. Behind him, Chuck gets pulled backwards off of his feet.)
PILL BUG: Hold on a sec. I gotta...there!
4. (Pill Bug stands up, holding the tracer. He looks around when he realizes that chuck has disappeared.)
PILL BUG: Got the tracer. Now we can--hey. Where'd you go?
5. (Pill Bug looks around the Jeep towards it's rear. Behind him, a shadowy figure approaches, raising a crowbar.)
PILL BUG: Chuck?
PAGE 20:
1. (EXT. CITY--EVENING: Rash, Dizzy and Bailey are running from the Store Owner and Yuppie Man. Rash is smoking several cigarettes. His arms are full of stolen cartons of smokes.)
RASH: RUN AWAY!!!
STORE OWNER: Stop them! They stole from my store!
YUPPIE MAN: They stole my wallet!
2. (On Rash and Dizzy, running side by side.)
DIZZY: You have money! You could have paid for those!
RASH: You're never gonna get anywhere in life if you always choose the easy solutions Dizz.
3. (Rash, Dizzy and Bailey run towards us. They are approaching an alley where Havoc Boy is waiting, leaning up against the wall.)
DIZZY: I'm not gonna get anywhere in life hanging around you!
RASH: Oh really? Then why do you?
DIZZY: I must be punishing myself for things I did in a past life.
4. (As the three punks run past the alley, Havoc Boy swings a full trash can around and slams it into the Shop Owner and Yuppie Man.)
5. (Rash and Dizzy stop running. In the foreground, the Yuppie Man is lying on top of the Shop owner. Both and unconscious and covered in garbage.)
RASH: Wrong! You can't get enough of me, that's why. You can't stand the fact that you broke up with me and now you want to be around in case I decide to take you back!
DIZZY: You idiot! I broke up with you because you're a self destructive asshole!
PAGE 21:
1. (Havoc Boy is cradling Bailey in his arms like a baby.)
RASH (off panel): You told me you wanted to be single!
DIZZY (off panel): I do want to be single!
RASH (off panel): Oh, is that why you keep eye ****ing Pill Bug every chance you get?
DIZZY (off panel): Nothing's going on between me and Pill Bug!
BAILEY (sad): Mommy and Daddy are fighting again.
2. (Dizzy and Rash, faces inches apart, scream at each other.)
DIZZY & RASH (together): YOU'RE A ****ING DOUCHE!
3. (Dizzy walks away. Rash calls out to her.)
RASH: Come back here! I'm not done berating you!
DIZZY: **** off Rash!
4. (EXT. ALLEY--EVENING: Dizzy is shocked, staring with her mouth open. Rash, Bailey and Havoc Boy are a few feet behind her, walking into the alley.)
RASH: Sure! Walk off and avoid this. That's what you're best at! Every time we--
5. (On Rash, stopping in his tracks and shutting up.)
RASH: Oh crap.
PAGE 22:
1. (FULL PAGE SPLASH: Next to the Jeep, crouching over a bleeding Pill Bug, is a scrawny, dirty teen wearing a goblin mask. He's holding a bloody crowbar.)
PAGE 13:
1. (EXT. CITY--EVENING: HIGH ANGLE: Rash screams into the sky.)
RASH: I NEED A ****ING CIGARETTE RIGHT ****ING NOW!!!
2. (Rash stomps off into a smoke shop, pissed and out of control. Dizzy tries to stop him.)
RASH: Screw this! When Rash Vasquez want something, Rash Vasquez gets it!
DIZZY: No! Wait!
3. (SAME AS PANEL 2: Dizzy waits nervously for Rash to exit the smoke shop.)
STORE OWNER (from inside store): Hey! I told you to never come in here again!
RASH (from inside store): I need a cigarette!
STORE OWNER (from inside store): CALL THE COPS!
4. (SAME AS PANEL 2: Rash and Dizzy run from the STORE OWNER, a fat, old man waving a baseball bat.)
STORE OWNER: Stay out of my store you little shit!
DIZZY: You got caught stealing from there two weeks ago, remember?
RASH: I hate this city.
PAGE 14:
1. (Rash and Dizzy round the corner and stop. Rash doubles over, gasping for breath. In front of them are Bailey and Havoc Boy, ducked behind a mailbox and spying across the street.)
RASH: Can't breathe...need...cigarette.
2. (Dizzy crouches down next to Bailey, trying to see what she sees.)
DIZZY: What is it? Cops?
BAILEY: So much worse than cops.
3. (EXT. NEWS STAND--EVENING: Across the street, a YUPPIE MAN and his YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND are at a news stand. The Yuppie Man is wearing a light tan dress jacket and black slacks. His girlfriend is an equally expensive outfit.)
BAILEY (off panel): Yuppies.
4. (BIG PANEL--CLOSE UP on Rash, looking up with a vengeance.)
RASH (with total spite): Yuppies.
PAGE 15:
1. (Rash shoves Dizzy out of the way, taking her place next to Bailey.)
DIZZY: Asshole!
RASH: What's the plan?
BAILEY: There's two of them, so we're gonna keep it simple. We wait until they get close enough. When they do, Havoc's gonna break their legs and rape the guy in front of his woman until they both cry.
2. (On Havoc Boy, disgusted.)
HAVOC BOY: No.
HAVOC BOY: I'm.
HAVOC BOY: Not.
3. (Bailey looks at Havoc Boy. Rash keeps looking forward, ready to completely **** up the yuppies across the street. Oh how he hates yuppies.)
BAILEY: Well you should.
RASH: I've got a better idea.
4. (EXT. NEWS STAND--EVENING: The yuppie couple walk away from the news stand. Yuppie Girlfriend is flipping through a magazine. Yuppie Man tucks his wallet away inside his jacket.)
5. (The couple walks down the street. Dizzy is approaching them.)
YUPPIE MAN: There. You got your magazine. Happy now?
YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND: Yes. Very.
YUPPIE MAN: Does this mean we'll be having sex tonight?
YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND: No. Probably not.
PAGE 16:
1. (When Dizzy walks past the couple, she turns and stares in horror at Yuppie Man.)
YUPPIE MAN: Guess we'd better make a stop at the porn shop then.
YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND: Didn't you hear? It burnt down.
YUPPIE MAN: Oh that is just fu--
DIZZY: Oh my god! You're on fire!
2. (Yuppie Man looks around himself, panicked. His girlfriend looks confused. Dizzy points and screams.)
YUPPIE MAN: Huh?
DIZZY: Fire! Somebody help him! He's on fire!
3. (Bailey and Rash come out of nowhere and tackle Yuppie Man to the ground. Yuppie Girlfriend looks bored, unimpressed.)
RASH: Shit man! Get on the ground!
BAILEY: Stop, drop and roll! STOP, DROP AND ROLL!!!
4. (Bailey and Rash are on top of Yuppie Man now, beating the crap out of him while he lies in the fetal position.)
RASH: Put out the flames! Hit him harder!
YUPPIE MAN: Ow! OW!
PAGE 17:
1. (Dizzy grabs Yuppie Girlfriend and shakes her violently.)
DIZZY: What're you doing?! Call the fire department you twit!
YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND: I, I, I...
2. (Bailey tears the jacket off of Yuppie Man as Rash barks orders.)
RASH: It's the jacket! Get him out of the jacket!
3. (CLOSE UP on Rash's hand lighting the jacket on fire with a Zippo lighter.)
4. (Rash holds the jacket out at arm's length, turning away as it goes up in flames.)
RASH: YAAAAH!
5. (Rash and Bailey stomp the jacket on the ground.)
BAILEY: Die fire, die!
PAGE 18:
1. (Rash holds the ruined jacket up, looking at it. Bailey stands proudly next to him.)
RASH: Looks like we saved another life today Bailey La Blue.
BAILEY: Yes...but at what cost to us?
2. (Rash, Bailey and Dizzy walk away from the yuppie couple. Rash is still holding the jacket as they leave. The Yuppie Man is in shock. His girlfriend looks tired.)
RASH: No time to worry about that now. We're needed elsewhere.
RASH: No need to thank us. I'm sure you would have done the same.
BAILEY: Yes...but at what cost?
RASH (whisper): Would you shut up?
DIZZY: See ya!
3. (Yuppie Man looks on gratefully as the group leaves. His girlfriend looks at him like he's an idiot.)
YUPPIE MAN: Those kids just saved my life.
YUPPIE GIRLFRIEND: Those kids just stole your wallet.
4. (CLOSE UP on Yuppie Man's surprised face.)
PAGE 19:
1. (EXT. ALLEY--EVENING: CLOSE UP on Chuck's paranoid face. His eyes are wide with fear and suspicion.)
CHUCK: What was that?!
2. (PULL BACK to show Pill Bug working underneath the hood of the Jeep. Chuck is right next to him, looking around nervously.)
PILL BUG: You know, one of the effects of habitual marijuana use is increased paranoia.
CHUCK: I ain't shittin' you man. I heard something.
3. (Pill Bug pulls a metal box out from the hood. Behind him, Chuck gets pulled backwards off of his feet.)
PILL BUG: Hold on a sec. I gotta...there!
4. (Pill Bug stands up, holding the tracer. He looks around when he realizes that chuck has disappeared.)
PILL BUG: Got the tracer. Now we can--hey. Where'd you go?
5. (Pill Bug looks around the Jeep towards it's rear. Behind him, a shadowy figure approaches, raising a crowbar.)
PILL BUG: Chuck?
PAGE 20:
1. (EXT. CITY--EVENING: Rash, Dizzy and Bailey are running from the Store Owner and Yuppie Man. Rash is smoking several cigarettes. His arms are full of stolen cartons of smokes.)
RASH: RUN AWAY!!!
STORE OWNER: Stop them! They stole from my store!
YUPPIE MAN: They stole my wallet!
2. (On Rash and Dizzy, running side by side.)
DIZZY: You have money! You could have paid for those!
RASH: You're never gonna get anywhere in life if you always choose the easy solutions Dizz.
3. (Rash, Dizzy and Bailey run towards us. They are approaching an alley where Havoc Boy is waiting, leaning up against the wall.)
DIZZY: I'm not gonna get anywhere in life hanging around you!
RASH: Oh really? Then why do you?
DIZZY: I must be punishing myself for things I did in a past life.
4. (As the three punks run past the alley, Havoc Boy swings a full trash can around and slams it into the Shop Owner and Yuppie Man.)
5. (Rash and Dizzy stop running. In the foreground, the Yuppie Man is lying on top of the Shop owner. Both and unconscious and covered in garbage.)
RASH: Wrong! You can't get enough of me, that's why. You can't stand the fact that you broke up with me and now you want to be around in case I decide to take you back!
DIZZY: You idiot! I broke up with you because you're a self destructive asshole!
PAGE 21:
1. (Havoc Boy is cradling Bailey in his arms like a baby.)
RASH (off panel): You told me you wanted to be single!
DIZZY (off panel): I do want to be single!
RASH (off panel): Oh, is that why you keep eye ****ing Pill Bug every chance you get?
DIZZY (off panel): Nothing's going on between me and Pill Bug!
BAILEY (sad): Mommy and Daddy are fighting again.
2. (Dizzy and Rash, faces inches apart, scream at each other.)
DIZZY & RASH (together): YOU'RE A ****ING DOUCHE!
3. (Dizzy walks away. Rash calls out to her.)
RASH: Come back here! I'm not done berating you!
DIZZY: **** off Rash!
4. (EXT. ALLEY--EVENING: Dizzy is shocked, staring with her mouth open. Rash, Bailey and Havoc Boy are a few feet behind her, walking into the alley.)
RASH: Sure! Walk off and avoid this. That's what you're best at! Every time we--
5. (On Rash, stopping in his tracks and shutting up.)
RASH: Oh crap.
PAGE 22:
1. (FULL PAGE SPLASH: Next to the Jeep, crouching over a bleeding Pill Bug, is a scrawny, dirty teen wearing a goblin mask. He's holding a bloody crowbar.)