Mark Bertolini
05-26-2006, 06:47 AM
Here's four more pages, hot off the press (I posted these in the first 4-page thread, but it doesn't look like anyone's noticed them there, so here you go):
Magnum Opus
Page 5
1/ Close-up on Rex, his face a snarl, blood spattered across his sunglasses.
CAP: TWO WEEKS AGO.
REX: ****!
2/ Wide shot of Rex, guns smoking in his hands, blood splashed across his face, chest and suit. There are two dead men on the ground at his feet, very bloody and mangled. Another man stands a few feet away, holding a gun on Rex.
3/ Horizontal shot of the man holding the gun.
MAN: PUT THE GUNS DOWN, REX.
Page 6
1/ Medium shot of Rex, who is practically vibrating with anger, his guns clenched tightly in his fists.
REX: WHERE IS MY MONEY, YOU SON OF A BITCH?
2/ The man grins, not moving his gun.
MAN: YOUR MONEY IS GONE, OLD MAN. UNLESS YOU WANT TO BE GONE TOO, I'D PUT THE GUNS DOWN.
3/ Rex glares at the man, lips in a snarl again.
REX: EIGHTY THOUSAND DOLLARS.
REX: (attached) EIGHTY THOUSAND DOLLARS!
4/ The man shrugs, still holding his gun on Rex.
MAN: THAT'S BUSINESS, REX. NOW PUT DOWN THE GUNS AND I'LL LET YOU WALK AWAY. YOU KILLED MY GUYS, BUT I'LL LET THAT GO AS LONG AS YOU DON'T DO ANYTHING STUPID.
Page 7
1/ Tight shot on Rex's face.
REX: JUST…JUST GIVE ME MY MONEY AND I'LL GO.
2/ Tight shot on the man's face, mirroring panel 1.
MAN: THERE IS NO MONEY.
3/ Rex throws up his hands, still holding his guns, and clutches at his head, in agony.
REX: THAT WAS MY MONEY, GODDAMIT. I'M NOT LEAVING WITHOUT IT.
4/ Wide shot of the man stepping closer to Rex, gun still up.
MAN: THEN YOU DON'T LEAVE AT ALL.
5/ Rex drops his guns, head down, looking defeated.
Page 8
1/ Wide shot of the man lowering his gun too.
MAN: SMART MOVE, OLD-TIMER. NOW GET IN THE ****ING WIND.
2/ Rex lashes out, grabbing the man's gun hand.
REX: WRONG, ASSHOLE.
3/ Rex breaks the man's forearm, and the gun drops from his fingers.
MAN: GAAHH!
4/ Rex snakes out a hand and catches the man's gun before it hits the ground.
REX: YOU REALLY SHOULD NOT HAVE MESSED WITH MY MONEY. MY GODDAMN ****ING MONEY.
5/ Shot of Rex jamming the gun into the bottom of the man's chin.
REX: NOW I HAVE TO GO OVER YOUR HEAD.
6/ Rex fires the gun, blowing the roof of the man's head off in a bloody eruption.
REX: OR THROUGH IT, AS THE CASE MAY BE.
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Magnum Opus
Page 5
1/ Close-up on Rex, his face a snarl, blood spattered across his sunglasses.
CAP: TWO WEEKS AGO.
REX: ****!
2/ Wide shot of Rex, guns smoking in his hands, blood splashed across his face, chest and suit. There are two dead men on the ground at his feet, very bloody and mangled. Another man stands a few feet away, holding a gun on Rex.
3/ Horizontal shot of the man holding the gun.
MAN: PUT THE GUNS DOWN, REX.
Page 6
1/ Medium shot of Rex, who is practically vibrating with anger, his guns clenched tightly in his fists.
REX: WHERE IS MY MONEY, YOU SON OF A BITCH?
2/ The man grins, not moving his gun.
MAN: YOUR MONEY IS GONE, OLD MAN. UNLESS YOU WANT TO BE GONE TOO, I'D PUT THE GUNS DOWN.
3/ Rex glares at the man, lips in a snarl again.
REX: EIGHTY THOUSAND DOLLARS.
REX: (attached) EIGHTY THOUSAND DOLLARS!
4/ The man shrugs, still holding his gun on Rex.
MAN: THAT'S BUSINESS, REX. NOW PUT DOWN THE GUNS AND I'LL LET YOU WALK AWAY. YOU KILLED MY GUYS, BUT I'LL LET THAT GO AS LONG AS YOU DON'T DO ANYTHING STUPID.
Page 7
1/ Tight shot on Rex's face.
REX: JUST…JUST GIVE ME MY MONEY AND I'LL GO.
2/ Tight shot on the man's face, mirroring panel 1.
MAN: THERE IS NO MONEY.
3/ Rex throws up his hands, still holding his guns, and clutches at his head, in agony.
REX: THAT WAS MY MONEY, GODDAMIT. I'M NOT LEAVING WITHOUT IT.
4/ Wide shot of the man stepping closer to Rex, gun still up.
MAN: THEN YOU DON'T LEAVE AT ALL.
5/ Rex drops his guns, head down, looking defeated.
Page 8
1/ Wide shot of the man lowering his gun too.
MAN: SMART MOVE, OLD-TIMER. NOW GET IN THE ****ING WIND.
2/ Rex lashes out, grabbing the man's gun hand.
REX: WRONG, ASSHOLE.
3/ Rex breaks the man's forearm, and the gun drops from his fingers.
MAN: GAAHH!
4/ Rex snakes out a hand and catches the man's gun before it hits the ground.
REX: YOU REALLY SHOULD NOT HAVE MESSED WITH MY MONEY. MY GODDAMN ****ING MONEY.
5/ Shot of Rex jamming the gun into the bottom of the man's chin.
REX: NOW I HAVE TO GO OVER YOUR HEAD.
6/ Rex fires the gun, blowing the roof of the man's head off in a bloody eruption.
REX: OR THROUGH IT, AS THE CASE MAY BE.
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