critiques appreciated

[teamlattie]

im doin construction and need a job drawin
http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i167/timlattie/pageone.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i167/timlattie/pg2b.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i167/timlattie/pg3b.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i167/timlattie/pg4b.jpg

http://i72.photobucket.com/albums/i167/timlattie/pg5B.jpg

[VANDAL]

GAWD this is some nice work!

[sacredsincomics]

Beautiful work. Such a lovely style.

Good luck man. :)

:kewl:

[Ron Phillips]

I'd have to say you've got a wonderful style to tell adventurous children tales.

Not much to comment on with this actual art. I did look at your website, and some of the magic of this style gets lost in your finishes/inkes. I think your work would look wonderful if rendered either by paint or a talented colorist.

[Matango]

Yes man great! Be carreful when you finish these.
One thing thats wrong here is the forum. hhehe this should be on "sequentials"

[Dannthr]

Lovely,

Looks like Construction has been doing you some good, no reason to leave that wonderful work now.

- Dan

[Steve Robinson]

WRONG FORUM this belongs in sequential forum moving it

[joshm]

At first glance I noticed the first panel should show a background going far off into the horizon line, however, I don't see anything. You either didn't finish this or you're planning to leave it out. I would put it in, because right now it looks like it is a warms eye view, but it is a bird’s eye view, which is why you need to include that background.

Everything else from there looks great. Until I got to the last page and the characters seemed to grow up or something. I'm not sure if this is apart of the story, but the characters don't look the same in the last page as they do in the other pages. Otherwise, I like everything.

I would have this type of style colored, rather than inked. You seem to use some shading that doesn’t work well with ink.

Josh

[Phatman]

Solid storytelling and consistant quality throughout. Good luck getting work.

[teamlattie]

thanks everyone i really appreciate the comments

[Ogre187]

You're stuff still looks great Tim. Awesome, awesome stuff. :kewl: