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05-19-2006, 01:39 PM
http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h195/jaredsouza/Untitled-1.jpg http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h195/jaredsouza/page2.jpg http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h195/jaredsouza/page3.jpg http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h195/jaredsouza/page4.jpg http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h195/jaredsouza/page5.jpg
this is a short strip i did for the olympia comics festival annual anthology zine.
05-19-2006, 09:14 PM
You know, I kinda like this. It really brings me back to my CREEPY and EERIE magazine roots. Nice work.
06-03-2006, 12:25 AM
Here's another post I'm surprised that hasn't gained much notice. This work is excellent in my opinion. The perspective, the anatomy, the layouts and inking are all quite wonderful. This isn't Marvel or DC type art, it certainly would draw the indie crowd: think Daniel Clowes or Charles Burnes. Post more art when you have it.
06-03-2006, 12:47 AM
Honestly, I'd like to see more of this stuff posted here because I like this style the more I look at it. If you could hook up with a letterer, this comic could go places.
06-03-2006, 01:07 PM
:banana: :banana: :banana:
06-03-2006, 11:19 PM
This is excellent stuff. The art has great angles, shadows, fluidity and uniqueness. The story shows some nice storytelling techniques like the implied backstory and foreshadowing in just these few pages as well as being interesting. My only crits would be that a thinner tool should be used to do the lettering to seprate it more and sometimes the order in which to read the balloons is a bit unclear. I want to read this as a full comic but its gotta stay black and white.
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