Batgirl

[MoreInSorrow]

Drawn by the very talented Ed Benes :)

http://img133.imageshack.us/img133/1294/edbenessm36fm.jpg

[jpruitt0692002]

looks good....please post the pencils :) i like to compare :)

[MoreInSorrow]

looks good....please post the pencils :) i like to compare :)
Just added them :)

http://img119.imageshack.us/img119/5691/benesbatgirl5zl.jpg

[jpruitt0692002]

looks really good....i would have to say this is your best one thus far. here are some crits for ya :) In the panel where the batarang is flying through and hitting his hand, maybe make the action lines a bit more noticble...they are really hard to see and it kinda looks like the baarang is just sitting there without the action lines being more apparent. and in the main panel, i would add some more weight to the line of the garbage dumpster cause it looks kinda flat and blends in with the wall behind it. thats about it, awesome job. keep showing me more :) i'm eating it up!

[MoreInSorrow]

looks really good....i would have to say this is your best one thus far. here are some crits for ya :) In the panel where the batarang is flying through and hitting his hand, maybe make the action lines a bit more noticble...they are really hard to see and it kinda looks like the baarang is just sitting there without the action lines being more apparent. and in the main panel, i would add some more weight to the line of the garbage dumpster cause it looks kinda flat and blends in with the wall behind it. thats about it, awesome job. keep showing me more :) i'm eating it up!
Thanks :)