preview pages of 'mortality bus stop & grill'--

[finfanfoom]

hi all,

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a107/finfanfoom/mortality_issue_1_cover_by_finfanfo.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a107/finfanfoom/page_01.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a107/finfanfoom/page_02.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a107/finfanfoom/page_04.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a107/finfanfoom/page05.jpg

http://i10.photobucket.com/albums/a107/finfanfoom/page06.jpg

:D

[sevans]

Overall it looks pretty interesting.

But, I had to re-read one of the pages twice (the last page) because I couldn't pick which person was which. This might be more obvious at the larger print size though.

And in the third B&W page, the character in the three panels (on the phone) -his appearance changes too much from panel to panel. His face in the second panel seems longer and thinner than the first.

I do like the use of numerous textures and techniques. Love the colour in the cover.

Keep postin!

[finfanfoom]

thanks, sevans.

[sacredsincomics]

Pretty good. I like, it's different.

:kewl:

[finfanfoom]

thanks.:)