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05-17-2006, 03:30 PM
Avengers forever page by Carlos Pacheco:
My inks, open to C&C as always:
05-17-2006, 03:36 PM
Fantastico! no crits here. superb job my friend!
05-18-2006, 12:14 AM
NICE, G.W.,,,,if you have an extra copy of these pencils laying around I would like to give them a shot. I have never inked over Pacheco before so it would be a nice little portfolio piece for me to work on.
05-21-2006, 07:03 AM
nice job. improve your hatchings though.. it'll create more depth in regards to "dark to light concept"
05-22-2006, 11:56 PM
In some places the piece is a bit mechanical. If you thicken your line weight in your shading area it will help with the mechanical feel. On the girlís right hand, the pencil looks like it has more structure and when itís inked it looks more cartoon/animation feel to it. I would have followed more of the pencils there on that hand. Most if it looks great, though. Good job.
05-23-2006, 02:10 AM
I like it actually, but it could use a more looser and lively feel with the brushwork :) It's still really good, I just think that would give it a bit more energy. Maybe more radical lineweight changes and relaxed strokes, and thicker hatching.
05-23-2006, 10:25 AM
Nice job. I'd like to see more.
05-24-2006, 01:18 PM
Awesome work. Would you send me a hi-res scan of them for colors? I'd love to work on this page.
05-24-2006, 01:47 PM
I love Pacheco's work and you've done a really good job over his pencils. You might want to check the reference though-I think this a page from Ironman, not Avengers Forever.
05-24-2006, 08:33 PM
No, it's from X-Men, around issue 65.
Nice clean work, dude. Pacheco can look amazing or pretty bad depending on the inker. I'd say you make him look real good. Oh, and you do yourself a few favours, also!
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