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GW.Fisher
05-17-2006, 03:30 PM
Avengers forever page by Carlos Pacheco:
http://inkwellgraphics.homestead.com/files/Avengerspencils.jpg
My inks, open to C&C as always:
http://inkwellgraphics.homestead.com/files/Avengersforever1.jpg
jpruitt0692002
05-17-2006, 03:36 PM
Fantastico! no crits here. superb job my friend!
VANDAL
05-18-2006, 12:14 AM
NICE, G.W.,,,,if you have an extra copy of these pencils laying around I would like to give them a shot. I have never inked over Pacheco before so it would be a nice little portfolio piece for me to work on.
vandal1z@yahoo.com
denart
05-21-2006, 07:03 AM
nice job. improve your hatchings though.. it'll create more depth in regards to "dark to light concept"
joshm
05-22-2006, 11:56 PM
In some places the piece is a bit mechanical. If you thicken your line weight in your shading area it will help with the mechanical feel. On the girl’s right hand, the pencil looks like it has more structure and when it’s inked it looks more cartoon/animation feel to it. I would have followed more of the pencils there on that hand. Most if it looks great, though. Good job.
Josh
Mecha
05-23-2006, 02:10 AM
I like it actually, but it could use a more looser and lively feel with the brushwork :) It's still really good, I just think that would give it a bit more energy. Maybe more radical lineweight changes and relaxed strokes, and thicker hatching.
nickleboy
05-23-2006, 10:25 AM
Nice job. I'd like to see more.
TheBDC
05-24-2006, 01:18 PM
Awesome work. Would you send me a hi-res scan of them for colors? I'd love to work on this page.
-Ross
Phatman
05-24-2006, 01:47 PM
I love Pacheco's work and you've done a really good job over his pencils. You might want to check the reference though-I think this a page from Ironman, not Avengers Forever.
JamieRoberts
05-24-2006, 08:33 PM
No, it's from X-Men, around issue 65.
Nice clean work, dude. Pacheco can look amazing or pretty bad depending on the inker. I'd say you make him look real good. Oh, and you do yourself a few favours, also!
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