exploding batarangs?

[thecarrierone]

hey gang! havent been able to do too many pages lately
still putting together submission proposals for my last project The Carrier
meanwhile im experimenting with a new approach to doing my comic work
this page is just rough pencils and no backgrounds yet but the process i used streamlined my work time down to two hours

tell me what u think
ps the beeping was just thrown on it to make it clear whats going on

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v196/thecarrierone/BATPAGE.jpg



pps- im planning to ink it up and drop this off at dc's booth in chicago this summer... this page and two or three more plus a cover image done in my photo style

[heartofglitter]

Looks good, love the different style. One ting I'd watch is the shape of your front on faces, Ivy's face on the far right panel just below the first one is very strange; it looks very skew-wiff. Might want to fix that. :)

[thecarrierone]

thanks ill take a close look at how to remedy that