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05-14-2006, 09:53 AM
test I did a while ago.
05-14-2006, 03:59 PM
i like it. smooth.
but take it from a recovering border breaker: it's more distracting than it is useful. :)
05-14-2006, 05:33 PM
Very clean and easy to follow. Good work.
05-16-2006, 05:18 PM
boy shocker on roids! looks awesome.
05-24-2006, 03:25 AM
As always very nice! :banana: :bounce: :carrot:
" Always Give Credit where credit is due."
05-24-2006, 05:28 AM
Storytelling: Excellent. It was very clear to follow and flowed very well.
Style: Solid but nothing I haven't seen before.
05-24-2006, 02:30 PM
Yeah, that Shocker looks badass!
05-24-2006, 03:19 PM
Very nice job. Very clean pencils AND, much more important, story telling.
05-25-2006, 01:10 AM
Looks good but Spider-Chick in panel four should break panel three rather than panel two. The break of borders that you have disrupts the natural reading and makes the reader want to skip panel three. In essence, why have panel three?
05-25-2006, 11:59 AM
Thats some good art.
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